Reviews for Rin Rin's Concoction
The-Shadow002 chapter 10 . 9/6/2007
Great story here, funny as hell in lots of parts with great spoken dialogue between the characters and great character interaction between Wataru and his sisters. Nice little ending you've go their though I think it got wrapped up a little too quickly in those last couple of paragraphs. Great work and a great story, well done.
The-Shadow002 chapter 9 . 9/6/2007
Haha very funny chapter again, loving it really, few spelling and grammar problems here and there, loved how you slipped in Usagi and Rei into the school hehe, loved the dialogue once again.
The-Shadow002 chapter 8 . 9/6/2007
Ahh great chapter here, I just love the dialogue you've given Wataru its simply hilarious. Nice work.
The-Shadow002 chapter 7 . 9/6/2007
Nice chapter, loved the dialogs in this chapter between Wataru and his sisters, very funny. The line at the start thats from you the authors point of view is a little confusing to have right there, you may want to add an A.N. or something in front of it. Nice work.
The-Shadow002 chapter 6 . 9/6/2007
Another great chapter here. Few spelling mistakes here and there, the bit with the sunrise was great and his technique of blowing past the girls ears and their reactions is well done and funny.
The-Shadow002 chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
Great couple of chapters here not many grammar problems. Loved the scenes in the ice cream shop and I love Wataru's ramblings at the kitchen table hah, funny funny stuff.
The-Shadow002 chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
Oh man, another funny one, no real problems with grammar in this chapter, well written.
The-Shadow002 chapter 2 . 9/6/2007
Oh wow, haha, very funny chapter here, quite a few spelling mistakes here as well, story is very interesting.
The-Shadow002 chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Interesting story, few spelling mistakes here and there, but mostly pretty good. I'm looking forward to how this stories going.
Major Fraiser chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Lol funny fic .
OotoriSenpai chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Lol good fic! funny!
golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 10 . 12/25/2005
This story is really funny! *adds to favorites* Anyways, I thought that this story was better than any of the Sister Princess fics out there in this section! :P


Aura Black Chan chapter 10 . 11/27/2005
Augh, it can't be true! This cool fic has come to an end! Oh well. Thank you!
Wing Omega chapter 10 . 11/23/2005
The last chapter and you didn't mention Marie at all?
Shiakou chapter 10 . 11/9/2005
Hoho, nice ending!
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