Reviews for Daylight Fading
brook chapter 10 . 5/19/2005
that was pretty exciting. now there all out of there and the sirens are coming..yah
Creedo chapter 10 . 5/19/2005
Exciting chapter. Looks like things are coming to an end. I'm so glad April is with the guys now, and okay. Again, love the 'blue locked on blue'. Can't wait to see how the guys are gonna make David and the rest pay for what they've done. I do hope Starsky's car is okay. We all know never to mess with his car. (or his partner)

Till next chapter...
Kreek chapter 10 . 5/19/2005

This is very exciting, with all the explosions and whether they will get out or not. Keep going! Don't let us wait too long!

Starsky's Strut chapter 10 . 5/18/2005
Well, you left the poor guys and April in danger...

Ah well, I shall tune in again for the next chapter of "Daylight Fading" ;-)
wuemsel chapter 9 . 5/13/2005
Another opportunity to state my


STILL mean point to leave your reader, girl! *grumble* Tought Id sneak in here to see if maybe you posted some more - calming - sentences, but... *sigh nervously* You ARE moving the magic ones, though, right now, arent ya? *make huge bambi eyes*

Loving this one, but you know that! :D Cant WAIT for more! (
Elivalero chapter 9 . 5/12/2005
Very intense chapter with a wonderful, moving end.(Though youre making me suffer pretty bad with this story :-))

More soon, please!
TorchlightArchive chapter 9 . 5/12/2005
:o So cool

This just gets better :D
Kreek chapter 9 . 5/12/2005
Man, that is some cliffie! I can just picture them, giving each other that small smile, a beautiful moment amidst all the violence. Thanks for that and don't keep us in suspense too long!

Starsky's Strut chapter 9 . 5/11/2005
oh, WOW... I can't wait to find out what happens next... Poor Hutch, Starsky and April... How will they ever get out of there alive?

More Please? Very Soon? Like, today?
brook chapter 9 . 5/11/2005
tell me there gonna be ok...right. so glad you updated. hate cliff hangers..rats
Creedo chapter 9 . 5/11/2005
OMG! No! Please let them live. I beg of you...*sniff* That was an intense chapter. I have to catch my breath. (I just realized I was still holding it) *breathe* Ok, WOW. What can I say?

'Blue locked on blue as he caught Starsky's gaze.'

Loved that line. Perfection.

The next chapter can't come soon enough!

Kudos to you my friend!
Jan in VA chapter 9 . 5/11/2005

HOW IN THE WORLD ARE OUR GUYS GETTING OUT OF THIS ONE? ...or do they in your story? "Hutch's" dream has him "seeing" "Starsky" die/shot. Maybe that's only because he goes a few seconds before "Hutch"?

Love cliffhangers, but I really don't like the hanging part till the next chapter! GRIN!

Type to you later! God Bless!

Jan in VA
SilentTrainConductor chapter 8 . 5/9/2005
Aw! April is portrayed so realistically and lovable, I hope they all get out of this ok...

I really loved the levity in this chappy with Starsky and his car D Lightens the situation some, thank yous )

Sorrys it took mes so long to review...I thought I had
wuemsel chapter 8 . 5/6/2005
*grin* Just read it again, and *I* *still* like Scooby! *grin* AND the car scene! *double-grin*

Greatly written and a lot of fun, this. No surprises there! ;)

Move the magic fingers!
Rebelcat chapter 8 . 5/5/2005
Oh wow... Hutch's visions aren't very reassuring, are they? Fires, explosions, yikes!

I loved the bit about Starsky's car, though, and especially this line:

"If this is what Brooklyn did to people, Hutch never wanted to go there."

Good stuff!
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