Reviews for To catch a cop |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying this story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the banter between Sly and Carmelita. |
![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I definitely love that last part after Carmelita swayed her hips and blew him a kiss,then Sly says to god thank you many times. |
![]() ![]() Okay,I seriously think there way to much flirty chit chat in this fanfic. |
![]() ![]() This is amazing story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember randomly finding this story via google around 4 years ago (around the same time I started reading Sonic and Amy the Accident) and I enjoyed it. This story was partly (MOSTLY) the reason I got into writing my own fanfictions. To share my own stories. Save for a few mistakes (missing spaces between words), this story is still just as great as it was when I first read it! I'd love to see a sequel with Sly's and Carmelita's kids doing stuff. Maybe takes place ten-fifteen years later? |
![]() ![]() Even years later I read this story and it tugs and my heart's tender strings.. I'm so glad to have read this again. I read this story as you posted it in past years and look forward to future stories from you. Sincerely: Blues J. Veronica |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is your first story of them all, but I personally think this one your best, just because of all the amazing humor within it. Read the whole thing in one day and I would do it all over again if I could. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome i don't know if you finished this recently (after all ive read the perfect birthday series) but ive only just read this last part. But its awesome and i hope there is a sequel :D |
![]() ![]() Good enough for a read from start to finish. You spent a lot of time elaborating on their playful banter in the middle, which was good. But your story lost it's charm a bit and became a bit creepy. Also the ending seemed rushed... And was not very creative. The beginning was your best! The grammar got better as the story went on too, so I think with practice you can become a great fanfic writer. I wish you the best of luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good, are you planning on making anything new with the 4 kids involved? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is pretty good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this fic and and all your other Sly cooper fan fictions keep up the good work |
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![]() ![]() Arr this is a very good story mate and you really should continue with this maybe about their children. And I want you to do or else you have to walk the plank on my ship. |