man, this is amazing

And I thought I had experienced maximum amount of Sly Cooper but then I read your story. The beginning really made me to keep reading the story more and more.. and getting more interesting all the time.

Awesome

Omg this story is fantastic *rainbow explodes from the back of my head*
I love sly jr. And also the story in general was very subtle yet very romantic, you must teach me your ways oh mighty writer of stories for I am a writer in training, look me up on deviant art, my name is silverxblaze1
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Wow. I am amazed at your ability to write. I love sly cooper and you did an absolutely phenomenal job on writing this. It's definitely one of my favorite. The only thing that would have made more sense is if you put Bentley I'm a wheelchair like he is in the 3rd game. Once again, well done!

Bro, this is a great story, well done *enthusiatic clapping* You have a great potential my friend,

Unfortunately I'm tired. But I'm defiantly reading this tomorrow.

Hahaha I love this so far I could imagine the who thing all the way down to the voice when reading this love it :D

How...provocative XD

Shouldn't Bentley be in a wheelchair? Wait you wrote this before the third one came out right? Well, I'll keep reading.

*sighs* Carm's right. He is one hunky thief. Sly is a man that every girl dreams of, saying words that every girl wants to hear. The ideal boyfriend/husband. Very descriptive and vivid. :)

Man I'd feel like a voyeur from having to witness that. Poor Bentley. Carmelita is a bit out of character but I guess seeing her relaxed side is something that's not presented in the game itself. Wondeful detail as usual. Sly hasn't taken off uis shirt, right? Ooh, this is getting intense.

Hmm, very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hey! It didn't mention that she put her clothes back on. Anyway, I love the banter between them. Sly's as smooth as ever and Carm is just as annoyed. Gotta love that guy. XD

*sighs* Oh Carmelita. So blinded by her ignorance and stubborness to face the fact that she has feelings for him. I'm so glad that he chose to be with her at the end of H.A.T.