Reviews for To catch a cop |
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![]() ![]() This was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It's so well phrased, making you feel as if you were really there. I really liked how perfectly the character's feelings are portrayed. A couple common grammar errors like twowords smushed up against one another, but other than that, two thumbs way up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! for sly and carm. they made it through it all. well, with the execption of her father, but still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! sly and carm finally get it! they're in love. reading on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute! poor carm though. she's so confused. i hope she can figure it out soon. reading on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sly, always have to be the flirt, doesn't he? good story and so reading on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! I've read this over and over, and the way you describe Carm, it is CALIENTE! Be sure to read my story Kingdom Hearts I,My Way! New chappies every 10 reviews! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was great! I love it! |
![]() ![]() Oh My God, that was the stupidest dialogue I have ever read, it's completly dry and so out of character. And it's completly typical just like every single one of the other incredibly stupid sly/carmelita pairing stories clogging up fanfiction. I mean "I'm dreadfully sorry lovely lady but I'm doing this for your own god." How stupid is that? The entire story is incredibly boring, |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, loved the ending. I'll try to read more of your fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say, you are just about the best Sly Cooper author EVER! I read the series that started with the perfect birthday present it was awesome. Keep writing this stuff. It ROCKS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA! Oh, brilliant story, Captein! A captivating and enthralling story, so brilliant and funny and exciting and-and-and everything! And thanks for helping with my Spanish, though my friends were very confused when I asked if I got the translation right for 'Dejele me solo raccoon loco!' I couldn't help but crack up! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the way this story went. |
![]() ![]() i loved the entire story. every scene was so well thought out. it was just a great story all around:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh..dear god I wish you'd do a sequel to this. You have the best ability to write sly cooper stories I've ever noticed. you are in my favorits |