Reviews for Squall's Spill
Jasmine32 chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
That's just so sad. I could just imagine Squall thinking like that though.
Apple Pie chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
my only comment is that it's very short. sometimes that's good if you want to get a blunt point across, like you're doing, but the words don't really take you anywhere. there's little resolvement or progression, so one can't really feel the gut of what he's trying to say. squall's kind of petty and flat at first anyway, but i think you could have milked it more. nice effort. _
Tseng no Chibi-san chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
:Eyes widen: Whoa...nicely done...:Whistles: You've got Squall PERFECT! Your view was better then mine (or anyone elses for that matter)

Oh, thanx for the review on my story.