|Reviews for The Fire Within|
| BonesGirl447 chapter 11 . 6/22/2014
Wait.. You kind of hinted at it throughout the story, but you never answered if Starfire was pregnant or not. Oh well, I'll jut take it as not.
| BonesGirl447 chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
Ugh as soon as you said her name my mind went to BTVS. I'll try to picture her different... not working so well right now.
| BonesGirl447 chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Oh my gosh. Laughed at the end. Thanks for making me laugh Sorry I just found your story this week. :/
| Iamfunfunfun65 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I love this story! and yes i am new and I already read the whole story
| shandi chapter 3 . 8/7/2008
are you using german if so please email me back
| Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 11 . 1/21/2008
Absolutly Mazin fic m8 :D
| ravanwolf chapter 11 . 9/2/2006
SLADE YOU F* BASTARD!
I'm sorry, I don't usually swear but that phrase is the most fitting for Slade. Ew, who knew he- no wait, I'm sorry, IT!-IT was bisexual
| Black Raven chapter 2 . 8/23/2006
Hey this story is good!
But the word for daughter in german is tochter not totcher.
I'm from Austria, so I have to know.
Go on with the story like before!I really like it!
| Teva chapter 9 . 3/27/2006
:'( My GOD. Slade is a F**KING EVIL B*STARD. AGH. -pokes his eye out and shoves it in the other socket... and breaks every one of his bones and... and.. and.. andandand locks him in a something to rot.-
| Teva chapter 2 . 3/27/2006
Oh yeah! I LOVE DRU! heh.. I was wondering whether it was just a coincidence... XD AGH DIE SLADE.
| Silver Warrior chapter 11 . 3/8/2006
Slade is a sick sonofabitch. A side, twisted, sadistic bastard.
| cemetarydemon chapter 11 . 10/8/2005
interesting...very interesting. nice job though some parts were a little -cough- sick. but good none the less. that would be funny if you wrote a sequel to this sequel but you summed up the furure all ready. but we never got to find out who aidens parents were. I WANNA KNOW I WANNA KNOW. yea it would be nice to put up a just so you know chapter saying aidens parents who had this many kids stuff like that. i weird i know.
| Lady Elm chapter 11 . 7/20/2005
WOW the whole story was GREAT!
| FullWhicanAlchemist chapter 11 . 7/14/2005
OMG! That was so awesome! Ever since I read Keeping Secrets, I've been asking myself "What whould happen if Raven WAS pregnant?" I love the story. Well, I didn't like the Yaoi part or the lemon, but it was still a good story. Keeping secrets, In my opinion, was better, but this story was good in its own way. You're an awesome writer!
Alexzandria: The Full Whican Alchemist
| King Phoenix chapter 8 . 7/5/2005
That was sick and wrong in so many ways. I thought I was about to loose it all over my computer; if you catch my drift. In future stories could you not insert the Yaoi scenes or make some kind of fic that are like deleted Yaoi scenes.