i loe luis! i hated that he died..PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Hi, I just read your story and just wanted to et you know that I really liked it. i'm not even sure if you'll recieve this; you seemed to stop this story two years ago so for all I know your e-mails changed or...something. Anyways, just thought I'd let you know!

Great start, but i'm a little confused why the second chapter is there, seeing as it was in the prologue. Anyhoo, please write more, this is really promising.

Dude, like the story Update soon!

nice story u have here. but you have the same chapter twice. i like luis so far. Keep it up and continue!

Yup, this is a pretty good chapter, and I see you (like myself) write short chapters. It's still really good, I'm hoping to see more.

I really liked your story so far even though it is only one chapter. I hope you continue to update it.

I liked Luis and it was very unfortunate that he was killed.