Reviews for Invisible
odalys-ortiz chapter 7 . 5/29/2009
That's a sweet ending to a great story. I'm glad Maria chose Dave in the end. I would have done the same thing. Great work and an enjoyable read
odalys-ortiz chapter 6 . 5/29/2009
Dum dum dum. That's what I call a cliffhanger. Hopefully Maria will make the right and obvious choice
odalys-ortiz chapter 5 . 5/29/2009
Man, I wish he could help me relax like that. lol Seriously though, I hope that Randy gets his because he is starting to become a real thorn in my side. Great chapter either way
odalys-ortiz chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
Okay, Randy needs a smack outside the head for thinking he could control Maria like she was his. I'm glad that her and Dave got to enjoy their date and they even kissed. I love this chapter. Can't wait to read the next
odalys-ortiz chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
Finally they are going to go on a date. That's so sweet. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
odalys-ortiz chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
It would be so easy for Dave to snap her like a twig. I doubt he would do that though. I hope that they can make up so that Dave can go after Randy and tear him a new one
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Randy is such a jerk. I hope that things can get settled between Maria and Dave. I really enjoyed the chapter either way
viper-sa chapter 6 . 4/12/2006
Was that the end of the story? what a strange why to leave it and on the other hand i like the mystery of it :)
Perfect Imperfections chapter 6 . 4/12/2006
aww...cliff hanger. Darn I was hopin u would tell us now. I guess i gotta wate. Keep up the great work. C U in the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Jaime chapter 6 . 4/12/2006
oh! cliffhangers! i hate them! :) i can't wait to read more. i'm hooked!
Insane Cali Gurl chapter 5 . 1/14/2006
Can I date Daivd next? LMAO! Or just borrow him for my next plane ride! LMAO! More soon PLEASE!

steffi-weffi16 chapter 5 . 12/15/2005
This is a good story. the chapters are a lil short but it's still good. why haven't u updated in ages?

Trish chapter 4 . 11/3/2005
you should really keep this story going seems like it could be good
smv chapter 5 . 8/18/2005
Oh my gosh you can not leave us hanging like that. great story
Kissybabe84 chapter 5 . 5/6/2005
Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep the chapters coming.
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