Reviews for Fidelity
MatoakaWilde chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I really liked the parts you added with Sirius going to Peter's cave and such.
mikomi bansiki chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
hey, this was really good. i liked it very much.
Emmasj chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Oh, I liked it. I got a little confused somewhere at the end, not sure why . . .

But I really liked the part with Hagrid, you did a really good job with him. Most people have trouble keeping him in character, but you were great.

Really sad, really accurate with what we already knew. Beautiful.

HoshiHikari chapter 1 . 3/22/2005

it looks the same as the book

a proud geekfreak chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
this makes me sound like a loser, but I had to look up the word Fidelity. once I did, I loved the title! this was such a great and sad story! I mean really sad.

the title fites in perfectly with how Sirius feels for the Potters.

the way you wrote this was wonderful! it had such amazing details in it and it was very well written. makes me wish I could write that well, (which makes me even more sad!)

this story is amazing and I am recomending it to anyone who will listen to me. I congradulate you a such a beautieful story. and it was truely amazing.
Adhara1 chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Finally, a fanfic worthy of depicting Lily and James' death, as well as Peter's betrayal. It takes a truly talented writer to so beautifully pick up from the pieces that JK Rowling left off with. Congratulations, you did a truly fantastic job!