Reviews for She's not perfect
jo chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
its rly gd update soon luv xxjoxx
marie chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Great story, but it could be presented in a better way. The writer had the idea, but for my concept it was too obvious what happened in the story. But what it killed the story was the end. OH MY GOD! don't you have anything else on your mind to develop?
brookedavis chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Good story, just try to write with more emotions in it! :) but I like it this far please update

and check out my "8 simple rules" fan fic called "popularity" :)
bucky chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
great story! :) had about the same idea for a fic but i just never wrote it down ;)
SerenaFelicity chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
please update soon. maybe she should have twins. i can't wait for the baby to be born.
sandy chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
well...the idea is not bad, but i think it be better if it wouldn't be just a dialoge...you know...more about what they think and do...

But its up to you I quess...oh, and you should continue:))

Its good
marcie chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
good story. continue please.
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