|Reviews for Sacrifice|
| Kissy Fishy chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
So... Roy got a little cocky, thought himself to be God, and so the Homunculus crucified him like Jesus?
At the beginning of the story, you had some mixing of past and present tense. Other than that, I saw no errors. Good job.
| Inkspots chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
SHIZ THAT WAS FRICKEN AWESOME! You, my friend, have a talent... If this was continued it would make meh very happyyy~
| JessiTsuki chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Blod. Blood and character death. Rather disturbing but well written. I wish Edward and Alphonse's response to this had been shown as well.
| Starshine chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Beautifully written, and the implication in the ending was just... powerful, and somehow incredibly manga-like. I know "human sacrifice" thats always plopping up in the story is no this, but really could be.
| fAteD lOvE chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
...the suspense...dun dun dun...
that was really cool, especially the detailed descriptions, albeit gory.
hope you update
| Nando the RPS King chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Wow, that was brutal. Well-written, though, and the idea of the homunculi having their enemies killed and brought back as one of their own is an intrigueing one.
| Nilmiel chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
Holy, freaking, crap. That was horrible. wellw ritten, don't get me wrong, but not what i was expecting at all. i didn't notice it was horror. God, im not going to be able to sleep tonight...
| Melitza chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Wow. That was umm... absolutely brutal. Terrible thought - if things end that way, I'm going to be all kinds of pissed off.
I definitely think Hawkeye would have a breakdown though, just as you wrote. And I'd hope that Havoc and the others would be there to help her.
Roy being a humunculous though? *Shudders* I think an even more interesting thought to have though is whether Riza (particularly) would follow him, even if he isn't what he was before... Or, if she'd feel absolutely set in needing to destroy the abomination of Roy.
You're brutal, my friend - but you do manage to get an emotional reaction out of me with your stuff. _
| Catalia chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Very nice. The only problem was located in the grammar (you switched tenses a few times), but other than that... just awesome. I'm definitely going to see what else you have written. D
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
Wow, that was graphic and depressing. Poor Riza. :( I hope the manga will have a much happier ending for her and Roy.
You have excellent and detailed writing skills.
| liliwick the WORD chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I like blood, horror and mature/complex writing. Well done. ;)
| canaday chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Dude! Will you think of continuing this? I think that you should...I loved it alot..please continue this storyline...pretty please?
| Wolf Creek chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
That was absolutely heart wrenching... I hate it... but in a good way...
| kimhallam chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Wow. A haunting but truly fantastic and original fic. I know you said it was a "what if?" but this has some great potential. Are you sure it should just be a one-shot? Can we twist you arm to continue this?
| Kye1 couldn't sign in chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Hey! I love the storyline. The detail was breathtaking, and I think that elaborating on this story, that you'll do just as good. I loved it so much, and I felt horrible for the fact that Roy was killed inside his own office. What suprised me is how did no one not know that he was killed in his office? Did they not hear him? Was there a scuffle? Was Roy fighting for his life? Or did he just allow himself to be killed?
But I think that you captured the characters perfectly. But I ask of you: can you continue this story? I hope that you do. and I will be glad if you do.