Reviews for Monkey HeadButting
omnitroid chapter 8 . 8/29/2016
“When life gives you lemons, don’t make lemonade. Make life take the lemons back! Get mad! I don’t want your damn lemons, what the hell am I supposed to do with these? Demand to see life’s manager! Make life rue the day it thought it could give Cave Johnson lemons! Do you know who I am? I’m the man who’s gonna burn your house down! With the lemons! I’m gonna get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon that burns your house down!" - Cave Johnson.
kirbyfan1996 chapter 9 . 4/13/2016
Happosai, you lucky bastard.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/5/2015
Omake: Alternate Scene

"NO" Akane went jump in front of Ranma but was grabbed by Daisake & Hiroshi

"This s a fight between two men, no far interfering"

"Two men" she fired back She jabbed a finger at Kasumi "Does that look like a man to you?"

Before either could respond Mousse swang his sword & decapitated Ranma


"Kasumi?, Akane you feeling alright?"

"Rana & Kasumi had swapped bodies now because of you two my sister is dead & my fiancée is now my sister. First you'll pay ever sent your family owns then you'll pay with your bodies"

Akane snapped before advancing on them
leroygordon chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
This Nabiki has some REALLY serious issues. I've heard of narcissists, but this one is over the top. And Nodoka is impossible, herself. Her son has been swapped with another person, and all she can focus on is how he needs to change back so he can satisfy family honor. No wonder the kid's a mess.
Thurhame chapter 3 . 11/15/2013
A little mistake in this chapter - you mention the sisters going to school together. Kasumi is two years older than Nabiki; she would have finished her third and last year of high school just before Akane started her first. They wouldn't have attended the same school at the same time since elementary school.
Zhor chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
This would have made an interesting arc in the actual show. Huh, good job.
shugokage chapter 9 . 2/15/2013
Incredible story good job!
Fenarinarsas chapter 9 . 4/25/2012
After ten years it feels great to read again this old classic. Glad I stumbled into this story again.
Hammerchuckery chapter 9 . 4/13/2011
ClanCrusher chapter 9 . 11/6/2010
I have reviewed your story. Unfortunately, it doesn't fit within the character limit imposed on these review segments, so you may find it in my forum "The Fanfiction Critic" in the Ranma section under the first pinned topic "The Fanfic Critic".


eddog2323 chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
this story is too short. i think it should finish with everyone back in their own bodies. any how you just gave me an idea. it would be funny if the ring broked while nabiki was trap in ranma's body. i think i could write a story that follows this.
xRocKxOuTxLouDx chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
luv the idea gonna read the rest when i get the chance lol
dirtyShoes chapter 9 . 9/1/2009
That was pretty good. The way you portrayed Kasumi was quite believable and it was interesting to see her in a position other than a homemaker. I wonder if she would consider resuming her training, in her own body of course, in an effort to fulfill that curiosity she developed about her own potential? Who knows?

Anyway, I enjoyed it while it lasted.
claymade chapter 9 . 3/14/2009
Ha ha ha ha! A work of extreme comedic brilliance. You take the simple mechanism of the head-butting that serves as the story's core, and leverage it in all kinds of ways-both hilarious and insightful, often both at the same time, all the while keeping that classic Ranma feel of zaniness to it. Very much a joy to read!
deletedforpersonalreasons chapter 9 . 9/21/2008
O.O oh, the-the pure, unadulterated, undefeatable, shocking HORROR! It's a crazy, terrifying MASTERPIECE. Very few people could write something so-so FRIGHTENING! I'm scarred for LIFE that's what I am...

Pure Genius ;)
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