|Reviews for A love that will last forever|
| Dauntless4eva chapter 25 . 8/11
AGH. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I THINK IM CRYING
| Guest chapter 22 . 12/22/2012
| SiriuslyPink chapter 9 . 6/24/2012
'"Rap battle" she practically jumped for joy in telling Lucius this, even though I was very strange for her to be talking to the Lucius Malloy this way she did enjoy it.'
Honestly? Is this a troll fic?
| SiriuslyPink chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Not only should you check your grammar, but you have a lot of typos.
| SiriuslyPink chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
This writing is horrible. I don't mean to be rude or anything, honestly I'm not, but I needed to say that. You're grammar is that of a 6th grader (11 year-old, incase you're not from USA and are unfamiliar with the schooling system). I suggest getting a beta if you ever decide to come back to this, because it needs more than a little touch up. But anyway, despite everything that makes me cringe in this fic, I'm gonna continue reading because I acually like the plot. Ish.
| bookworm1519 chapter 25 . 5/11/2012
nawwh this is cute and i hope you are planning to contiue it :) really sad about hermione and the baby when i thought she was died it made me cry xx
| bookworm1519 chapter 10 . 5/11/2012
:O really goodd x
| xXNeverEndingFireXx chapter 25 . 1/24/2012
Pansy's confession sounded 's a slytherin(!) not a although human, I doubt this would be her response.
| Beautiful-Liar13 chapter 25 . 4/16/2011
this is awesome I love it hope that you update soon
| Ssssss chapter 12 . 7/4/2010
Loser loser loser
Stop writing a fanfic
| Sssssss chapter 10 . 7/4/2010
I regret to read your story...
Wish I never...
Do u want to be an author?
Think it again because you are a loser not an author...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Have u died already?
U have so many stories but only few have completed.
What the hell do you want?
Go fuck ur self...
Before that,study hard about grammar
| Lady Clare Boleyn chapter 25 . 5/29/2010
OMG luv the story so much! u have to write some more ASAP love the story line and i hope draco and hermione have a kid
| MyMyMaia chapter 25 . 5/4/2010
Wow this fic is amazing I love the plot line I feel so bad for little Alex and how he's dead. Is there going to be another child?
| Smirkin Shanks chapter 7 . 5/2/2010
it's called unexpeted love by fieryphoenix