Reviews for Pretty Little Secrets
animecutylover chapter 1 . 3/23
This sure is surprising. The possible next gen baby death eaters not joining Voldy?
snamioneBDSMcuriosity chapter 41 . 1/12
This was a nice small story. It’s good there is a sequel, but I personally like this ending and am gonna leave it at that.
Wolvie26 chapter 41 . 9/22/2020
Love it! This is my fist Neville is with Voldemort fic. You did a great job of hiding him while giving clues that you didn't get till it's revealed who they are. Can't wait to read the sequel when I get a chance.
Lu Bright chapter 8 . 8/16/2020
Why is Harry so forgiving? All the years of abuse, black’s imprisonment, the childhood he was robbed of, and the one fact that DUMBLEDOOR HAD DO RIGHT TO FREAKING DECIDE WHERE A MAGICAL CHILD WILL BE GIVEN TO! DUMBLEDOOR PLACED A BABY ON A DOORSTEP IN A NOVEMBER NIGHT! DUMBLEDOOR-THE SAME MAN WHO AGAIN HAD NO RIGHT TO REFUSE A CHILD THE RIGHT TO READ THEIR PARENTS WILLS! HE LIED AND LIED AGAIN AND AGAIN! HARRY NEVER SAW HIS PARENTS GRAVES! DUMBLEDOOR HID HIS HERITAGE (the Veela) FROM HIM-AGAIN HAVING NO RIGHT TO DO SO. HIS ACTIONS WERE ILLEGAL! DUMBLEDOOR’S CHOICES (Which again were not his to make!) KILLED SIRIUS. Not once. Not twice. But three times! Not to mention that PANSY and the rest of the slytherins HAVE NO RIGHT to stick there noses in Harry’s business. Especially with how they treated him when ‘spyingand how could an adult trust a child to spy on their cause? Again, you’d think that’s a bit far fetched.) Draco-calling Harry arrogant (the comment about big headed) even after hearing his father’s comments AND what Harry said, would click. Also, Snape? Dude. He saw what Harry has been through and you would think he would be able to relate. I mean, I don’t know, because Snape was abused?! Also, let’s point out again Harry’s point about the Dursley’s. I would like to bring up the subject about Remus. Dumbledoor saying “it would be safe for Harry if you stayed away” wouldn’t no SHOULDNT have had such sway on him. That boy was Remus’ last link to his good friends. You would think he would have written to the kid. Checked up on him. (WHICH IS WHAT DUMBLEDOOR SHOULD HAVE DONE!) and so far, you haven’t even written about how Sirius came back from the dead. Harry should have been angry-no furious at Remus but more so Dumbledoor and Snape. I mean, Snape, a what? Thirty five years old? A professor that treats his students like crap (mainly gryffindors) and probably inadvertently prevented many students from pursuing potions because of Snape’s treatment-and not have any repercussions of it? How the teachers ALLOWED THIS! And ALLOWED a GROWN MAN to TORMENT A CHILD! CALLING HIS FATHER SICH FILTH! It’s sickening. Look, the dude had it rough as a kid. But did Snape truly grow up? How much hatred Snape held for the Marauders- even after all those years CANNOT be normal. Honest to god sickening. And did Snape ever think that this ‘Rachel’, his wife, would have been okay with his behavior? Lets also bring out the fact that the teachers, all of them, time and time again, let Harry down by letting the student population to treat him like that. Now, let’s go back to Dumbledoor. WHY WOULD HARRY FREAKING TRUST HIM SO QUICK! HOW WOULD HARRY LOOK AT DUMBLEDOOR FOR GUIDANCE AFTER THERE LITTLE SPAT?! Not only that but Dumbledoor promised to be honest from now on. Why didn’t he tell Harry who told the prophesy to Voldemort? And how can you truly believe that Dumbledoor is not a bad man? Yes, it’s all for the greater good. Harry being abused is for the greater good. Not checking up on Harry and trusting magical hating muggles, which he fully knew they were because he was supposedly close to Lily (and wouldn’t allow Harry to stay at hogwarts, the supposed most secured place in England for the rest of the summer-AGAIN IT IS NOT IN HIS PLACE TO SAY! HE IS THE HEADMASTER AND THEREFORE HAS NO RIGHT TO SAY WHETHER A CHILD COULD STAY AT THIS RESIDENCE OR NOT! If say, someone expected abuse then the wizarding child services would intervene NOT THE HEADMASTER!) Dumbledoor has done many terrible things. Illegal things. And more. But! I do give you credit for not only writing a fanfiction but having the courage to put it out there for people to read. Honestly, I can’t say I would have the motivation to even finish one, so you have my respect. All that I said before, was pointing out major plot holes (and um odd actions of character? I don’t know how to put that into a sentence, apologies). This is not a flame, and if it has come across as one that wasn’t my intentions (sorry. I get really um passionate in my opinion xd). I was just saying that some of your characters actions and reactions are just not realistic. But! If you were going to non, then good job! (That was an honest compliment not a sarcastic one, again, it’s hard to express feelings through text sometimes). I would also like to say the JK Rowling had also missed lots of the realism too (in reaction aspect). Before this chapter (okay mainly the first few chapters) were amazing! The character reactions were spot on! But I think Harry would be a bit more um angry at the headmaster for not only hiding his Veela heritage (again dude, you can’t trust someone who does that and again, headmaster had no right) but giving Harry a huge scare. I mean, if I was vomiting up blood, and all that I would be wigging out. This is my honest review, and I said this without any malicious intentions. I again, give you points for starting and completing a fanfiction (it’s always hard to do so) not only that but posting it. Very Gryffindor of you! (I meant you being courageous hehe). I also would like to say your creativity is honestly something that I long for, and that is a trait to be proud of. I will not be continuing this fanfiction (sorry I get angry on main character’s behalf bc they should be angry), but, I would like to thank you for this chance to read it. I hope you are safe and well! ~Lulu
Lu Bright chapter 8 . 8/16/2020
Why is Harry so forgiving? All the years of abuse, black’s imprisonment, the childhood he was robbed of, and the one fact that DUMBLEDOOR HAD DO RIGHT TO FREAKING DECIDE WHERE A MAGICAL CHILD WILL BE GIVEN TO! DUMBLEDOOR PLACED A BABY ON A DOORSTEP IN A NOVEMBER NIGHT! DUMBLEDOOR-THE SAME MAN WHO AGAIN HAD NO RIGHT TO REFUSE A CHILD THE RIGHT TO READ THEIR PARENTS WILLS! HE LIED AND LIED AGAIN AND AGAIN! HARRY NEVER SAW HIS PARENTS GRAVES! DUMBLEDOOR HID HIS HERITAGE (the Veela) FROM HIM-AGAIN HAVING NO RIGHT TO DO SO. HIS ACTIONS WERE ILLEGAL! DUMBLEDOOR’S CHOICES (Which again were not his to make!) KILLED SIRIUS. Not once. Not twice. But three times! Not to mention that PANSY and the rest of the slytherins HAVE NO RIGHT to stick there noses in Harry’s business. Especially with how they treated him when ‘spyingand how could an adult trust a child to spy on their cause? Again, you’d think that’s a bit far fetched.) Draco-calling Harry arrogant (the comment about big headed) even after hearing his father’s comments AND what Harry said, would click. Also, Snape? Dude. He saw what Harry has been through and you would think he would be able to relate. I mean, I don’t know, because Snape was abused?! Also, let’s point out again Harry’s point about the Dursley’s. I would like to bring up the subject about Remus. Dumbledoor saying “it would be safe for Harry if you stayed away” wouldn’t no SHOULDNT have had such sway on him. That boy was Remus’ last link to his good friends. You would think he would have written to the kid. Checked up on him. (WHICH IS WHAT DUMBLEDOOR SHOULD HAVE DONE!) and so far, you haven’t even written about how Sirius came back from the dead. Harry should have been angry-no furious at Remus but more so Dumbledoor and Snape. I mean, Snape, a what? Thirty five years old? A professor that treats his students like crap (mainly gryffindors) and probably inadvertently prevented many students from pursuing potions because of Snape’s treatment-and not have any repercussions of it? How the teachers ALLOWED THIS! And ALLOWED a GROWN MAN to TORMENT A CHILD! CALLING HIS FATHER SICH FILTH! It’s sickening. Look, the dude had it rough as a kid. But did Snape truly grow up? How much hatred Snape held for the Marauders- even after all those years CANNOT be normal. Honest to god sickening. And did Snape ever think that this ‘Rachel’, his wife, would have been okay with his behavior? Lets also bring out the fact that the teachers, all of them, time and time again, let Harry down by letting the student population to treat him like that. Now, let’s go back to Dumbledoor. WHY WOULD HARRY FREAKING TRUST HIM SO QUICK! HOW WOULD HARRY LOOK AT DUMBLEDOOR FOR GUIDANCE AFTER THERE LITTLE SPAT?! Not only that but Dumbledoor promised to be honest from now on. Why didn’t he tell Harry who told the prophesy to Voldemort? And how can you truly believe that Dumbledoor is not a bad man? Yes, it’s all for the greater good. Harry being abused is for the greater good. Not checking up on Harry and trusting magical hating muggles, which he fully knew they were because he was supposedly close to Lily (and wouldn’t allow Harry to stay at hogwarts, the supposed most secured place in England for the rest of the summer-AGAIN IT IS NOT IN HIS PLACE TO SAY! HE IS THE HEADMASTER AND THEREFORE HAS NO RIGHT TO SAY WHETHER A CHILD COULD STAY AT THIS RESIDENCE OR NOT! If say, someone expected abuse then the wizarding child services would intervene NOT THE HEADMASTER!) Dumbledoor has done many terrible things. Illegal things. And more. But! I do give you credit for not only writing a fanfiction but having the courage to put it out there for people to read. Honestly, I can’t say I would have the motivation to even finish one, so you have my respect. All that I said before, was pointing out major plot holes (and um odd actions of character? I don’t know how to put that into a sentence, apologies). This is not a flame, and if it has come across as one that wasn’t my intentions (sorry. I get really um passionate in my opinion xd). I was just saying that some of your characters actions and reactions are just not realistic. But! If you were going to non, then good job! (That was an honest compliment not a sarcastic one, again, it’s hard to express feelings through text sometimes). I would also like to say the JK Rowling had also missed lots of the realism too (in reaction aspect). Before this chapter (okay mainly the first few chapters) were amazing! The character reactions were spot on! But I think Harry would be a bit more um angry at the headmaster for not only hiding his Veela heritage (again dude, you can’t trust someone who does that and again, headmaster had no right) but giving Harry a huge scare. I mean, if I was vomiting up blood, and all that I would be wigging out. This is my honest review, and I said this without any malicious intentions. I again, give you points for starting and completing a fanfiction (it’s always hard to do so) not only that but posting it. Very Gryffindor of you! (I meant you being courageous hehe). I also would like to say your creativity is honestly something that I long for, and that is a trait to be proud of. I will not be continuing this fanfiction (sorry I get angry on main character’s behalf bc they should be angry), but, I would like to thank you for this chance to read it. I hope you are safe and well! ~Lulu
Anime lord chapter 16 . 3/28/2020
Neville is the murderer
Anime lord chapter 25 . 3/28/2020
Please if nobody has figured this out
Zachvoria chapter 1 . 3/18/2020
Hello Tangerine. I don't know if you are still using this website or not, but I came across your fanfic "Pretty Little Secrets", and felt that it is an very interesting story between Harry and Draco. It will be my honor if I can have your permission to translate it into Chinese. I'll send you the links after your authorization.
MariaHikari chapter 33 . 2/10/2020
I KNEW ITT!
RitzyKitsune chapter 13 . 2/4/2020
And see Pansy this is why you should mind your own damn business instead of getting into what does not concern you, and she wonders why Slytherins have a bad rep soy or not that was a shitty thing to do to someone you claimed to want to be wfriends with that has saved your sorry ass at least twice now. If I were Harry Pansy would not have a hope and a prayer of ever even being friendly with me forget about being friends!
RitzyKitsune chapter 9 . 2/4/2020
Pansy is nice and all but like Hermione needs to sometimes learn to mind her own business about what others dont want to talk about.
RitzyKitsune chapter 5 . 2/4/2020
Man Dumbles needs to learn to mind his own business and let the cards fall where they may, he should have just let Harry stay in the Gryffindor dorms instead of the extra stress of staying around those who he has argued with and have been around when he was a nearly killed or fighting voldie.
Kushka chapter 41 . 1/26/2020
Great story
DrarryVeelaTrash chapter 3 . 10/14/2019
"I'm not gonna die!" Pause. "At least not yet!"
~Harry Potter

Optimism.
NA chapter 22 . 9/9/2019
What in the world do you mean by: “Sirius had been the groan responder”?
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