I didn't expect that at all!

Ouf! Harry's not dead ! But as you said things still aren't resolved!
I,don't think that Harry is being a jerk. In my opinion he acted exactly the way he should have.

God, you're cruel with poor Harry! But Draco will come around, I guess..

Pansy is really a Slytherin! She finally found out!
The kiss was very romantic: the rain, an accidental fall... All the ingredients were reunited!

That was an intense chapter! So,glad that Sirius and Remus are now Harry's parents

We learn a lot about the Elemental Veelas and I liked it!
Poor Pansy she's dying to know the truth about Harry! She's so funny!

Yes! The best chapter ever! I'm so happy about Sirius' rehabilitation!

Harry was amazing! How will he explain it to the others? Will he tell the truth ? I hope so!

I enjoy when Harry make Snape shut up! :-)

Haha! Dumbledore and the sorting hat are really evil!

I hope we will see some Harry's tantrums!

I like Pansy in your story. She's really interesting!

I love the fights between Sirius and Snape! Fortunately, Remus and Lucius are here to restrain their friend!

That was a great first chapter!
I love that slytherin group! They're so funny!
I think that Snape will believe Petunia, because he may know about what Harry is becoming.
(sorry if my english is bas but I'm french)

Love the story, and I love the way you worked in what Elemental Veela are, and what they can do. I have one minor problem, and that is the spelling. Some bits may have been because of formatting issues, as when there were multiple words squished together, but there were also some issues with tense, such as choose and chose. They were swapped often. Slytherin, not slytheirn. Other than that, it was a pretty damn amazing story.