Wait! Please make Ron come back this is breaking my heart! He needs to be friends with Blaise so that he can accept it when Blaise and Ginny get into a relationship!

Oh my fu*king god!
THat was just so perfect, i would have been so angry if there hadn't been a sequel ;3

Neville is the culprit. You kinda made it obvious.

Same house ruling out like hundreds of people.
Should have been me ruled out every one else, but Neville. I mean there was only two boys the prophecy could be about.
Everything else mention just add on to Neville. So unless you add on some random OC character, the mystery is spoilt.

I have very high options on Neville (along with others) so if it is him, and I really think it is him, don't make him act too crazy. (Yeah crazy like murder crazy but not crazy like on a table in boxers with a knife screaming bloody murder crazy)

Nice story by the way

i like it so far, i am on chapter 5

Who in the hell is Virginia Marie Weasley? Did you hit your head and forget Gingerva for a moment?

Continuity error. You said he used the cloak to escape from the slytherin common room, and now he's picking it up from the house?

Please fix your paragraphing for this chapter

Adorei essa fic embora eu acho teria ter tido um Epílogo da vida deles dois tipos os 19 anos depois bjs

Shit man, I was supposed be catching up- er, more like start - my statistics homework! But would this amazing story let me? Noooooo! Damn Veela Harry, even in words he's irresistible...
Bravo!

Severus Snape does not FLOP onto furniture. And children who grew up in the wizarding world do not have to scour books to realize July 31 is Potter's birthday.

This is laughable, and it boggles my mind how this juvenile story has so many Favs. I believe I'll find something else actually worth my time.

I'll give it one more chapter, but sweet Merlin is this childishly written.

At the end of the chapter in the A/N when you said 'I'm thinking of starting another story with Snape as Harry's daddy.' My mind...sorta...went the WRONG way with that sentence. (Grinns sheepishly)

I'm enjoying the story so far but i keep getting bugged by the fact that you keep spelling Theo nott's name wrong. just thought you should know

there are a few errors in this chapter

I read this before I became a member and I want to say your idea is genius.

I hope that you continue writing. Also please check out my stories