Reviews for Kim Possible: Fear And Robots In Las Vegas
Forlong chapter 2 . 3/23/2005
Oo-oo-oo. Cool! I don't remember anyone else ever using the Bebes as villains before. It's a very unique story.
recon228 chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
This is a good start to an interesting story. My only recommendation (and one that I give frequently) is that you start a new paragraph every time a different person talks. It adds to the flow of the story by helping the reader clearly distinguish who's talking.

Keep up the good work.

- recon228
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