|Reviews for Hand in Hand|
| The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 6 . 4/1/2005
awesoemenss! of course but in the grandfalther way.. now sirius is differentr lol.. anyway update asp.
| winslosr73 chapter 5 . 3/31/2005
I'm glad that you've been enjoying my reviews. I tried to review your story yesterday when I read it, but my computer wouldn't let me. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I like how you have Dumbledore conspiring to get them together. I also like how you keep providing suspense at the end of each chapter. Watch the grammar though. I think it was just that you were in a rush to get out the chapter so bigsmileygirl-3 wouldn't "haunt" you, but that's something that you can work on. I can't wait to read your next chapter (again).
| Niux chapter 5 . 3/31/2005
cool and everything, but when they'll kiss? XD hehehe
sos i can't wait :D
cool fic, go on :*
| The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 5 . 3/31/2005
o so dumbledor can change them back but woint? ialways likes dubledor lo.. anyway update asap.
| Lillian chapter 5 . 3/30/2005
Hand in Hand alright!
It is so funny! Sirius that sneaky son of a - well, i would have done the same thing but still he shouldn't have done that.
Anyway, i believe this to be a winning story. I believe in the next chapter you should put some more of Servous and Belitrix and so on to make more humor.
P.S. Have you ever thought of becoming a writer of comedy?
| Lady Pyrefly chapter 5 . 3/30/2005
It actually wasn't that great being handcuffed together. I spent most of the time beet red and gnawing at the handcuffs in an attempt to get them off. *curses her friend* Anywyas, cute chapter. _ And I'm glad you liked IWATC. Thanx for reviewing it. Update soon!
| lunarflower75 chapter 5 . 3/30/2005
It wasn't as funny as the other chapters but still funny none the less anyways please update soon.
| Lillian chapter 4 . 3/29/2005
I love it. It's hilarious. I can't stop laughing. Embarrassing scences filled with terror are always funny...when there not happening to you. Anyway, to all those who haven't read READ to those who have READ MORE!
| winslosr73 chapter 4 . 3/29/2005
I still thought that this chapter was pretty funny, although you're right that it was not quite as funny as the other chapters. I like that you have that spoiler at the end because it helps create a want in the readers to return to the story. I did however, think that this chapter was a little short, but sometimes that is unavoidable. I again look forward to reading your next chapter. Good luck :)
| lunarflower75 chapter 4 . 3/28/2005
I LOVE UR STORY!Its great and funny all the same please update soon ur doing a great job of writing
| The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 4 . 3/28/2005
awesomeness! aw... u should have said journey 2 proffs. dumbledores office/ lol anywya update aspa.
| Luvguurl chapter 3 . 3/27/2005
AH!This is really good! Update super soon im telling you this story is awsome!Im not just being nice either im usually very picky this is so good!
| Luvguurl chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
That was so funny! oK off to next chappie
| winslosr73 chapter 3 . 3/26/2005
This story is pretty good so far (at least I hope there's more to it as it seems to kind of drop off at the end). I like how you set up the story and how it all seems to fit together. I look forward to reading more of your writing, and hopefully seeing you progress as a writer, as you have said that you are trying to improve. Good luck.
| chocoholicbookworm chapter 3 . 3/26/2005
i love this! more, or i will personally haunt you.