|Reviews for One day at the lake|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Really good story, loved it.
Keep up with the great writing!
By the way your English isn't that bad, just a few grammar errors now and then but even with that, it was perfect! :)
| BoywhoCried chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
i love nejiten paart and the shikaino part :3
its damn awesome :)
| ShikaIno1 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
i loved ShikaIno in this!
| lulu halulu chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
LOL! That was hilarious!
| unknown chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
i loved this even though it was only 1chapter but it was about all the couples!including the jounin!i love how you made the girls sneak on the guys and how it ended really really realy good!your the only person who isnt a BAKA IN WRITING STORIES!
MAKE MORE STORIES
| shika-ino-4evers chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
| Mauia88 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
too good too good.
I very much enjoyed it, gave me laughs and tingles inside.
Awesome story, just finally found it 3 years later!
| PiscesHateScorpios chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
lol- so KAWAII AND FLUFFY! THAT was my daily dose of fluff!
| LovableLuna chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
That was cute.
I really liked it.
| iRibbon chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Funny XP Loved it!
| luvnaruhina chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I LUV NARUHINA!
| DOODLES chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
i liked it alot. i cant think of anything i would have done diffrently. i loved how you put tons of emotions into this oneshot.
| Ex-Captain Kenji chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Love the story.
| orangexfreezy chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
This is one of the first 'Naruto' romance fics I read. And I must say, it encouraged me to read on! So thanx for that. Oh, and was that a little KurenaiAsuma action I detected at the end? Sneaky. laterz
| Co0kIeS-n-CrEAm chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
EI THAT WAS CUTE! x33 Hehe I wubb Sasuke and Sakura && Neji and TenTen!