|Reviews for Make A Wish|
| Eyeofgilman08 chapter 1 . 7/5
I've read this story multiple times. It's definitely one of my favorites of the Harry Potter fanfic world. I love how you do the multiple views. It's awesome how you show what the world thinks of Harry and how Harry views the world. He's just a guy on vacation. ;) Thanks for writing this and it's sequel too. :)
| Guest chapter 50 . 7/1
| BOSS02109 chapter 2 . 6/29
Dude he totally had Molly brownies
| suziq968 chapter 19 . 6/28
I love you! I haven't laughed this hard in ages. Thank you so much.
| DennisJayHawthorne chapter 13 . 6/28
I have rarely read a story that can bring tears to my eyes and make laugh so hard I damn near piss myself in the same story, truly a remarkable tale! Love all your work.
| Guest chapter 45 . 6/26
Muhahahaha, the Onmake of the 3 Death Eaters talking about Mr. Black and 2 turning up dead due to the RoR is hilarious. The myth of Mr. Black was brilliantly constructed. Your fiction is a masterpiece of humour, creativity, uniquiness, planning, etc.
| momocolady chapter 50 . 6/26
love it, wonderful story
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/26
Hahaha, simply hilarious. I love this fic.
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/26
Hmm, I wouldn't have complained if your rating would have gone up to M with a very, very detailed and long description on how Harry broke his pelvis and wore out a dozen Veelas.
But there are enough (well, it is never really enough) other smut fics so I can't blame you for holding your comedy fiction relatively innocent...
On the other hand Death Eaters die left and right, he killed Vampires, a few criminals and a Werewolf, so I am not sure... there is a thin line between T and M, so you could have just rated M and gone with the flow.
I don't know which rating has more readers, T or M rating, I personally often use the filter to just see the M rating fics. I am 22 years old, but really, which 14 year old boy wouldn't watch porn or read M rated material? It is not as if the app knows the age of the readers. So theoretically you would have even gained new readers for writing a lemon with Harry and the Veelas.
*continue to read*
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/26
Haha, Harry does it again.
Damn, the bad luck of the death eaters is hiarious. 5 failed portkeys. The first group fell into their deaths infront of the balcony, the second in front of a moving train, the third in magic supressing holding cells, the fourth down the lift shaft, the fifth into the drinking machine.
I can't believe that portkeys are that dangerous and insecure... I would never use them again.
I just hope/pretend the reason all 5 ended in death was that they wanted to a person and not a secure location. And that the portkeys were international and illegal made by 'amateurs'.
Still, I would hestinate to use a portkey ever again.
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/25
*lol* he expects a quiet stay and ends up with, on the first night, 15 death eaters pummeling to their death. It's so funny I had to laugh. :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/25
I love how Harrys reputation as Mr. Black is now on the godlike stage, higher as 'the-boy-who-lived', even if 80% of his deeds are just wrong speculations... hilarious.
Yes, he is a skilled fighter, has inhuman reflexes, basilisk venom in the blood and advanced mage sight.
But he didn't spot any of their ~20 spys, didn't set up the serial killer, didn't use wandless magic on purpose, didn't inject the basilisk venom on purpose, didn't risk the advanced mage sight on purpose, doesn't work for anybody, didn't speak to the Mafia boss on purpose, ...
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/25
Haha, the situations are hilarious. Harry is just a skilled 5th year student and they all think he is a godlike veteran unspeakable...
The healer should have just asked, I am sure with a bit of coaching Harry would be willing to share his secret, basilisk venom with phoenix tears in the blood. Would have been further proof for them that he is an expert! ;)
| the psychotic bunny chapter 50 . 6/23
brilliant, awesome story, I love your work
| Princess Niki chapter 42 . 6/21
so.. so he set a trap in a school filled with children for volemort to come find...