|Reviews for Mission: Unacceptable|
| Riverfox chapter 3 . 6/4/2005
Great story! The dress parts were a little creepy, but all in all, very well written with a solid plot! I could almost see it as a episode! (Albeit a long one). Good job!
| Shania Nowhere chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Oh, what site did you find it on? Just curious..._ The only other site it should be on is
| neuroticperoxideblonde chapter 3 . 3/24/2005
Yes! I finally got to read the third chapter! Your story is really good. I found it on another site a few weeks ago and was reading it there, but for some reason I couldn't get the third cahpter to load. Now i'm really happy cuz i got to see what happened.
| Lost-Remembrance chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
This is a pretty good story, somewhat short, but still good. The only problem was that it skipped from part to part, no separation or anything in between so at some points it was a little hard to follow.
Other than that, good job!
in Liebe, Red Tail