Reviews for On the way down
sbmcneil chapter 15 . 10/4
I really can't see Harry or Ginny acting like this at all. It's like you switched the couples up. I can't see Hermione being married with children at 24. I think she would want to wait. Harry would want a family as he's never had one. I would think he would be married with children at an earlier age.
sbmcneil chapter 12 . 10/4
I still think she was a bit psychotic. How is two weeks early premature? Sorry, but I didn't think the whole chapter made sense. I did like that they had twins, but I can't see prim and proper Hermione being that vulgar.
sbmcneil chapter 11 . 10/4
Hermione is pregnant, not psychotic. I really can't see her acting this crazy.
RAVENCLAWDISTRICT1 chapter 7 . 2/21
you tell'em Ron!
RAVENCLAWDISTRICT1 chapter 12 . 2/20
I was too!
crazyblonde chapter 4 . 12/7/2016
I loved this fic! It was so cute and sad and happy and AHHHHH LILY AND JAMES
The only part I have to criticize is the fact that you put Charlie and Tonks together and that Remus only showed up once. If you're going to bother keeping them both alive you might as well ship them. BUT I LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH GOD BLESS
nayin1704 chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Okay
slytherclaw7 chapter 16 . 7/25/2016
Excellent, beautiful story!
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 16 . 11/17/2015
WHOAAA this was amazing and I Liked it very much. Yay. Thank you.
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 12 . 11/16/2015
I WAS! I was! I guessed twins!
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 11 . 11/16/2015
Well, I think you did well.
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 9 . 11/16/2015
YAY. I can't imagine what you are gonna do for the other 7 chapters... Sorry for short reveiws.
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 8 . 11/16/2015
haha yay.
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 7 . 11/16/2015
Uhh. Wow.
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 6 . 11/16/2015
Crying. *sniff* Seriously you're killing me. Wow, very sad but very good chapter. Amazingly written.
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