| Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
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  D chapter 3 . 12/27/2023 This sucks |
 zSnako chapter 1 . 5/9/2023 to the guy 19 reviews below me, I just wanna ask you one simple question... who hurt you my guy? it's not that serious bro... |
| RAMAN chapter 2 . 3/31/2023 THATS NOT HOW YOU FUCKING SPELL RAMEN IDIOT |
| Redfdragon chapter 6 . 11/15/2022 was pretty good tho don't know why you killed off hinata. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/13/2022 Nice Story! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/13/2022 Okay Sakura that was a good one |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/29/2021 Oh so NOW they pay attention to him when he's quiet |
| Amber1shipley chapter 6 . 1/24/2021 Hate it |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/14/2020 I don't like the end . I want everybody beg for excuse for naruto |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/16/2020 MY TEARS ARE REAL |
| anonymous chapter 4 . 10/4/2020 great story honestly! i love it so much! I REALLY LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAYED LEE AND GUY SENSEI LIKE I DON’T KNOW IF THERE’S ANYBODY ELSE WHO CAN FIT LEE’S CHARACTER THAT WELL. I LOVE THE WAY YOU MADE THEM TALK! but anywyays i really love this fanfic! keep up the amazing work! 3 |
| Bluewarrior3 chapter 7 . 7/17/2020 Hmmm your story was okay. There were some parts i didnt like, like how everyone was just bothering naruto constantly or how hinata just kept following naruto and not doing anything about it, she helped in the end but he had to go through everyone just for her to finally do something. Also the epilogue, you should have just stuck with the second one instead of making two. Perhaps this story wasnt for me but keep doing you and keep writing, especially if you enjoy it! |
| Bluewarrior3 chapter 1 . 7/17/2020 Hello author! I just read your first chapter but i just wanted to tell you to keep writing no matter what. I mean sometimes i read the reviews and people just talk shit even tho they have the option to leave. Don't get me wrong when i read a bad story i write a review letting them know what i didnt like and that there story wasn't for me, but some people are just plain mean. I hope you dont take there shit to heart because you are your own person and people who talk shit towards you instead of explaing why they didnt like the story are people who have no lives and just want something to get mad about. Anyways im still reading, i dont know yet if im going to like it or not because its just the first chapter but ill let you know:) |
| xboxonexth chapter 6 . 6/30/2020 This is why Hinata is best girl |
| Guest 8 chapter 7 . 4/2/2020 Have Sasuke have a crush on Hinata. lol Have Hinata asked Sasuke bring Naruto back for her. |