Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped
happy chapter 7 . 11/13/2014
Its so full of cheese :p jk. Good job
almost chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
But its sad.
Chast4 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Great story man I was crying at the end!
KoreanMusicFan chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
i think i like this ending the best.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2014
i like the next ending except for the part that hinata died but it fits into the story ending perfect so cant complain bye
Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2014
It is a real honor to read this it is both inspiring and touching you made me want to cry with a sense of i have no idea probably happiness it is story like these that i look forward to reading such wonderful mind blowing elegant stories you my friend have a gift so don't let anyone tell you otherwise thank you for writing this.
Ethyrin Kairos chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
This is kinda sad. Definitely drama and angst.
Hannah chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I recently looked up the meaning of Teme on the internet, it is a rude form of 'you'
Guest chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
Fuck you Bigotted asshole
Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
Gustavius3 chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
...Well done, this tale was well worth re-reading
Becki chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
I absolutely loved that ending! It was so sweet and memorable and you could feel all of naruto's love for hinata. It was just a perfect ending to an emotional story. :)
andysanime chapter 7 . 12/19/2012
Really good job on this story.
J.E.P 1996 chapter 4 . 11/19/2012
Some of the dialogue didn't have quotation marks.
J.E.P 1996 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
How does 'having a bit of a bit day' make any sense?
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