Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped
Ryuu842 chapter 6 . 4/3
I hated the ending.
Ryuu842 chapter 6 . 4/3
It's Kyuubi no Yoko.
bubble chapter 2 . 2/6
hey, this is a really good book and I am enjoying it so far but I thought you should know its spelled 'ramen' not 'raman'
milkman95 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
This story is fucking amazing
Guest chapter 7 . 8/18/2015
I cried. I love it!
This Username Is Classified chapter 5 . 6/16/2015
Oh my GAWD! I can TOTELLY sympathize with Naruto rn. I see them trying and trying 'till I MYSELF got annoyed! Like, how much more unfair can they get? Srsly. But yeah, great story!
Ginger Flowerz chapter 7 . 5/22/2015
That's way better but why did you make shino die?
Ginger Flowerz chapter 6 . 5/22/2015
You had hinata die!? How could you?! I cried and I am not a person who cries the last time I cried was jiraiya's death
happy chapter 7 . 11/13/2014
Its so full of cheese :p jk. Good job
almost chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
But its sad.
Chast4 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Great story man I was crying at the end!
KoreanMusicFan chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
i think i like this ending the best.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2014
i like the next ending except for the part that hinata died but it fits into the story ending perfect so cant complain bye
Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2014
It is a real honor to read this it is both inspiring and touching you made me want to cry with a sense of i have no idea probably happiness it is story like these that i look forward to reading such wonderful mind blowing elegant stories you my friend have a gift so don't let anyone tell you otherwise thank you for writing this.
Ethyrin Kairos chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
This is kinda sad. Definitely drama and angst.
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