Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped
Guest chapter 6 . 4/1
I didn't need my feeling, nope not at all.
CoolWolfMaster chapter 6 . 3/12
Oh my god... This storyline was amazing. I am literally in tears. You should continue being a writer. It suits how well thought out this story was.
999999999999999999999/5
justanotherfanfictionaddict-12 chapter 6 . 3/3
i have come to the conclusion that i am overly emotional. *wipes tears*
Sirto Taito chapter 6 . 2/5
I like fanfics were its not the naruhina ship but a supporting and helping fanfiction of them,you know...I just cried silent tears not sobs or whimpers. Im glad,I like this so much thank you for this story thank you!
Ryuu842 chapter 6 . 4/3/2016
I hated the ending.
Ryuu842 chapter 6 . 4/3/2016
It's Kyuubi no Yoko.
bubble chapter 2 . 2/6/2016
hey, this is a really good book and I am enjoying it so far but I thought you should know its spelled 'ramen' not 'raman'
milkman95 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
This story is fucking amazing
Guest chapter 7 . 8/18/2015
I cried. I love it!
This Username Is Classified chapter 5 . 6/16/2015
Oh my GAWD! I can TOTELLY sympathize with Naruto rn. I see them trying and trying 'till I MYSELF got annoyed! Like, how much more unfair can they get? Srsly. But yeah, great story!
Ginger Flowerz chapter 7 . 5/22/2015
That's way better but why did you make shino die?
Ginger Flowerz chapter 6 . 5/22/2015
You had hinata die!? How could you?! I cried and I am not a person who cries the last time I cried was jiraiya's death
happy chapter 7 . 11/13/2014
Ending
Its so full of cheese :p jk. Good job
almost chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
Happy
Ending
But its sad.
Chast4 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Great story man I was crying at the end!
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