Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped
Guest chapter 7 . 8/18
I cried. I love it!
TheDishThatRanAwayWithTheSpoon chapter 5 . 6/16
Oh my GAWD! I can TOTELLY sympathize with Naruto rn. I see them trying and trying 'till I MYSELF got annoyed! Like, how much more unfair can they get? Srsly. But yeah, great story!
gingerflowerz chapter 7 . 5/22
That's way better but why did you make shino die?
gingerflowerz chapter 6 . 5/22
You had hinata die!? How could you?! I cried and I am not a person who cries the last time I cried was jiraiya's death
happy chapter 7 . 11/13/2014
Ending
Its so full of cheese :p jk. Good job
almost chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
Happy
Ending
But its sad.
Chast4 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Great story man I was crying at the end!
KoreanMusicFan chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
i think i like this ending the best.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2014
i like the next ending except for the part that hinata died but it fits into the story ending perfect so cant complain bye
Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2014
It is a real honor to read this it is both inspiring and touching you made me want to cry with a sense of i have no idea probably happiness it is story like these that i look forward to reading such wonderful mind blowing elegant stories you my friend have a gift so don't let anyone tell you otherwise thank you for writing this.
Ethyrin Kairos chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
This is kinda sad. Definitely drama and angst.
Hannah chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I recently looked up the meaning of Teme on the internet, it is a rude form of 'you'
Guest chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
Fuck you Bigotted asshole
Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
おはよう!私はあなたの本を愛しています!
Gustavius3 chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
...Well done, this tale was well worth re-reading
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