| Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
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   shadowzerover5 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007 All i can say is...wow I sincerely believe this one of the finer written fics among I would like to see more of your work in future. Ja Ne! |
| black-hurt17 chapter 7 . 12/14/2007 its a really good story, really realistic, many people think it's easy to have a mask, i often admire naruto for people sometimes don't take no for an answer |
| AiSard chapter 7 . 12/11/2007 loved this fic. love the plot and general execution. wished Hinata had a larger role though p and her 'no more' speech was a tad dramatic but ya, loved it all the same |
| PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 7 . 12/7/2007 Excellent! NaruHIna goodness! |
| imnofangirl chapter 6 . 12/7/2007 that was... deep |
| Mama san Saki chapter 7 . 11/6/2007 aw...I cried in parts of it. I love this story...no..that's an understatement. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS AROUND! and it's completely changed my opinions about some of the characters! I'm about to fav...DONE! thanks for writing this! Oh and please can you review my story...I'm...running a bit short on reviews. *sweatdrop* |
| bi-chan chapter 1 . 11/6/2007 the title would make such a good song title. I'm listening to powder snow by ayumi hamasaki...its so depressing. But i love the story! It's well good! w00t! |
| AkitaSagaraAlanya chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 Yo, I'm sorry but I don't have much time so I can't read your fic and give it a creative rewive, but I am adding it so that I at least can read it later, Ja Ne ) P.S Please forgive me *boves deply while makin Hinata no poking no jutsu* |
| Nara-chan25 chapter 6 . 10/26/2007 AW! I love your story! |
| UNC2 chapter 7 . 9/24/2007 This was a nice story. Its one of the many things I hope to actually see in the are just the main three. 1.) Naruto finally snaps on everybody. 2.) Naruto gets a bloodline limit. 3.)Naruto gets with Hinata. I like the the second ending way better than the first one. |
| Mismoree chapter 1 . 9/12/2007 I love these kinds of storys! either crossovers, timetravels, banisments, or dark cool naruto are my FAVES! This is so cool! Thanks you so much for writing it! |
| SmiffyHallo chapter 6 . 8/20/2007 Gotta hand it to you... you make excelent stories... |
| gogeta408 chapter 7 . 8/5/2007 i very much enjoyed this story to bits. Great endings. |
| ILoveFoxes chapter 7 . 7/8/2007 YAY ! I love this ending ! Hinata-sama dying would have been too sad ! I have a not-so-simple request : COULD YOU PRETTY PLEASE MAKE A SEQUILE ? PLEASE ? ~ cough , cough ~ That is all , fellow writer . I cannot find a flaw . |
| BlackRoseFire chapter 6 . 6/24/2007 Nice in deep way. Why did Hinata have to die? Liked it pleaes keep up the writing. |