| Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
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  Anonymous chapter 5 . 2/12/2007 After all that yelling, Naruto's throat would be sore, unless... the Kyuubi heals it! |
 dreamlifter chapter 6 . 2/6/2007 Extremely surprising, yet logical ending. I just didn't expect you to take the story in such a serious direction. very fun to read, great job! |
| dreamlifter chapter 4 . 2/5/2007 very surprising, good read |
| dreamlifter chapter 2 . 2/5/2007 fun to read and natural banter from the cast |
| dreamlifter chapter 1 . 2/5/2007 nicely written, the pov came out very natural |
| lil-c-girl2218 chapter 7 . 1/31/2007 damn, i should be happy, but I'm not. But great story! I luved it! But why? why did you make so many die? |
| Anime ADHD chapter 6 . 1/20/2007 AW! That was so . . . sad! I think I almost cried! AW! Great job! |
| MadnessLover chapter 7 . 1/19/2007 Great story. I read it quite a while ago, and bookmarked it into my favorites bookmarks folder... I just read it again and out of habit clicked the review button. To my surprise it's letting me review, which is what I'm doing now. I could have SWORN I reviewed it last time... I'm positive I started reviewing everything I read before I started reading Naruto fics... Anyway, great story. One of my favorites! |
| Bulrog the god chapter 7 . 1/1/2007 This is possibly one of the best stories I have ever read |
| MotheroftheHorde chapter 6 . 11/29/2006 This story made me want to cry. To many people I know wear masks of some sort. Thamks for writing this MotheroftheHorde |
| kaze no enmaku chapter 7 . 11/24/2006 this is a master piece! i like it |
| gclp and friend chapter 7 . 11/20/2006 i like the last ending better. hinata is alive. good job with the story. |
| SUPERCRAZYGIRL chapter 7 . 10/27/2006 I CRIED (SNIFF SNIFF HICCUP SMILE) PLEASE I14 IT 5 STAR RATING |
| AnimeKage chapter 6 . 10/26/2006 i know you put it as humoer/drama but there wasnt all that much humor in it. i cried in the this chapter. anyway it was still brillant i loved it! good work. |
| FlowerGirl chapter 7 . 10/22/2006 I'm sorry about my over passonite friend QtbutterflyGirl but she is right. This is a very good story. I liked the 2nd ending better than the first. I was wondering when somoene would post a fanfic where Naruto goes AWOL on his teammates and friends. And you delivered. Can't wait to read any of the other stories you have. Keep up the good work! And as QtbutterfilGirl said: Naruto forever! |