Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped
orphanaccount1239 chapter 5 . 3/7/2020
Go naruto!
IrateDemonFox chapter 6 . 2/19/2020
Iratus odio vulpes fangirls...

And neither does Hinata. Those girls who /just/ noticed Naruto because he was brooding had better find themselves lucky the Hyuuga heir didn't notice them... or there would have been hell to pay! [As soon as she got her arms from around Naru-chan]
NumquamVulpesIra chapter 6 . 2/19/2020
I am literally crying from how beautiful this is.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/19/2020
'Eyesore in orange' my smallest left toe! He doesn't need anything a bit 'less bright' when he can already dodge ANBU with his skills! You tell him Naru-Chan!
Mui Carma chapter 1 . 4/29/2019
Fcc you Sasuke and Sakura. Swear, when you made this, I was only like 6 months old, lmao. Sup oldie c;
LOL chapter 6 . 4/5/2019
Your mother was a whore. You caught the crusty bitch spreading her cunt for the same prick who creampied your girlfriend. Thats why you wrote this angsty bullshit. Because you know that you're too much of a pansy to do jackshit, you fucking cuck. Hahahaha
Kingkong101 chapter 6 . 2/22/2019
Crybaby naruto
Monster King chapter 7 . 11/15/2018
Great job I liked it
6She6Devil6 chapter 3 . 10/2/2018
“Hinata knew most of Naruto’s favourite places to go”

Thai just reinforces the fact that she’s a creepy stalker, closet-pervert, useless weirdo.
chaosxxx chapter 7 . 7/25/2018
i still dont know who that group of giggling girls in the last chapter were... i want it addressed that naruto has fans
lydia98724 chapter 6 . 6/4/2018
Nooooooooooooo and yet...Yay?
Loveless Demon chapter 7 . 5/13/2018
SHINO!
Kamui Kamiliko chapter 6 . 1/20/2018
Well that was unexpected
Kamui Kamiliko chapter 5 . 1/20/2018
Bro... they tried to talk about respect? I got so butthurt on Naruto’s behalf lol
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 7 . 1/18/2018
Sad, yet extremely well-written! I'm sooo happy that you wrote an alternate ending. Very well done :D
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