Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Go naruto! |
![]() ![]() Iratus odio vulpes fangirls... And neither does Hinata. Those girls who /just/ noticed Naruto because he was brooding had better find themselves lucky the Hyuuga heir didn't notice them... or there would have been hell to pay! [As soon as she got her arms from around Naru-chan] |
![]() ![]() I am literally crying from how beautiful this is. |
![]() ![]() 'Eyesore in orange' my smallest left toe! He doesn't need anything a bit 'less bright' when he can already dodge ANBU with his skills! You tell him Naru-Chan! |
![]() ![]() Fcc you Sasuke and Sakura. Swear, when you made this, I was only like 6 months old, lmao. Sup oldie c; |
![]() ![]() Your mother was a whore. You caught the crusty bitch spreading her cunt for the same prick who creampied your girlfriend. Thats why you wrote this angsty bullshit. Because you know that you're too much of a pansy to do jackshit, you fucking cuck. Hahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crybaby naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job I liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Hinata knew most of Naruto’s favourite places to go” Thai just reinforces the fact that she’s a creepy stalker, closet-pervert, useless weirdo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i still dont know who that group of giggling girls in the last chapter were... i want it addressed that naruto has fans |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooooooooo and yet...Yay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() SHINO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was unexpected |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro... they tried to talk about respect? I got so butthurt on Naruto’s behalf lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad, yet extremely well-written! I'm sooo happy that you wrote an alternate ending. Very well done :D |