Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start, definitely something I havent seen |
![]() ![]() yes the pale eyed useless bitch is dead! to bad you spent seven damn chapters licking her ass and funny how she was never dressed down like the others |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to the rest of the rookie 9? Sakura- that bitch- insulted Naruto, he broke down, and Hinata embraced him and talked to him. What about the rest? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD, YOU LITTLE BASTARD. NOOOOOOO. BRING HINATA BACKKKKK |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started screaming when Neji started his destiny bullshit again. Geezussss. This is really stirring up my emotions, thanks. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another thing. THEY DON'T LISTEN. HE LITERALLY JUST STATED WHY HE WAS PISSED OFF. |
![]() ![]() Awwwwww |
![]() ![]() OMFG ARE YOU PEOPLE DUMB. LEAVE THE POOR BOY ALONE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY. Ah tugged on my heartstrings. I think i was a little teary eyed when i was reading this. i especially loved the way all the flaws of the other characters were brought to light. And Naruto had every right to be MAD. Also, yes i DEARLY believe everyone deserves a time out. Thank you for the great story. |
![]() ![]() I didn't need my feeling, nope not at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god... This storyline was amazing. I am literally in tears. You should continue being a writer. It suits how well thought out this story was. 999999999999999999999/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have come to the conclusion that i am overly emotional. *wipes tears* |
![]() ![]() I like fanfics were its not the naruhina ship but a supporting and helping fanfiction of them,you know...I just cried silent tears not sobs or whimpers. Im glad,I like this so much thank you for this story thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hated the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's Kyuubi no Yoko. |