Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's got a nice concept. It seems like it'll be a good one, so keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() kool story! hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeh good story...will your story lead towards Naruto unleashing Kyuubi and becomes strong and stuff, or Hinata come to confert him?...don't bother answer my question, i wanna be suprised by your story...lol:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool...update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() o! Naruto is P-I-S-S-E-D! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it a lot keep up the good work as usual |
![]() ![]() ![]() id be out of wack too if i got no respect after doing all that. but it was funny to see narutos new nick names for his team mates! he he he teme sakura and mule headed sasuke...though kakashi could do with a better nick name update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting... update please :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, great story so far, it seems really interesting. Update soon, okay? I would like to read the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i lied it till last 2 lines could have said something better and tail? come on but other than that good story update soon oh this better not be oh we're sorry, hold hands and skip down the street into sunset to many of those pathetic stories dont need another |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always love your fics, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() o an angsty Naruto, cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm eager to see how Naruto reacts to the rest of the Rookie 9 and Gai's team if he meets them while wandering around the village. Sakura and Sasuke deserve to feel bad for not even greeting Naruto after all he has done for them. I wonder how long Kakashi will wait at the bridge before he goes looking for his students? |
![]() ![]() ![]() W00t I LOVE YOUR STORY cool little one too Kinda odd but still naruto like! Ok hope you update soon |