Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped
Hisoka316 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
It's got a nice concept. It seems like it'll be a good one, so keep it up.
Fantasy's Magic chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
kool story! hope you update soon!
SuBeKi011213 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
yeh good story...will your story lead towards Naruto unleashing Kyuubi and becomes strong and stuff, or Hinata come to confert him?...don't bother answer my question, i wanna be suprised by your story...lol:D
hollywood1390 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Very cool...update soon
GnawRogue16 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
o! Naruto is P-I-S-S-E-D!
crakbaby23 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
i like it a lot keep up the good work as usual
ranma hibiki chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
id be out of wack too if i got no respect after doing all that. but it was funny to see narutos new nick names for his team mates! he he he teme sakura and mule headed sasuke...though kakashi could do with a better nick name

update soon
misao92 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
interesting...

update please :D
Ookami Mononoke chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Hey, great story so far, it seems really interesting. Update soon, okay? I would like to read the rest.
VentMonster chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
well i lied it till last 2 lines could have said something better and tail? come on but other than that good story update soon

oh this better not be oh we're sorry, hold hands and skip down the street into sunset to many of those pathetic stories dont need another
The Eromancer chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
I always love your fics, keep it up!
KunochiDreamer chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Interesting fic.
Patch5129 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
o an angsty Naruto, cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update soon
Dragon Man 180 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
I'm eager to see how Naruto reacts to the rest of the Rookie 9 and Gai's team if he meets them while wandering around the village. Sakura and Sasuke deserve to feel bad for not even greeting Naruto after all he has done for them. I wonder how long Kakashi will wait at the bridge before he goes looking for his students?
Arnoldstrife chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
W00t I LOVE YOUR STORY cool little one too Kinda odd but still naruto like! Ok hope you update soon
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