| Reviews for The Day The Smile Slipped |
|---|
  bubble chapter 2 . 2/6/2016 hey, this is a really good book and I am enjoying it so far but I thought you should know its spelled 'ramen' not 'raman' |
 milkman95 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015 This story is fucking amazing |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/18/2015 I cried. I love it! |
| This Username Is Classified chapter 5 . 6/16/2015 Oh my GAWD! I can TOTELLY sympathize with Naruto rn. I see them trying and trying 'till I MYSELF got annoyed! Like, how much more unfair can they get? Srsly. But yeah, great story! |
| Ginger Flowerz chapter 7 . 5/22/2015 That's way better but why did you make shino die? |
| Ginger Flowerz chapter 6 . 5/22/2015 You had hinata die!? How could you?! I cried and I am not a person who cries the last time I cried was jiraiya's death |
| happy chapter 7 . 11/13/2014 Ending Its so full of cheese :p jk. Good job |
| almost chapter 6 . 11/13/2014 Happy Ending But its sad. |
| Chast4 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014 Great story man I was crying at the end! |
| KoreanMusicFan chapter 7 . 7/20/2014 i think i like this ending the best. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2014 i like the next ending except for the part that hinata died but it fits into the story ending perfect so cant complain bye |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2014 It is a real honor to read this it is both inspiring and touching you made me want to cry with a sense of i have no idea probably happiness it is story like these that i look forward to reading such wonderful mind blowing elegant stories you my friend have a gift so don't let anyone tell you otherwise thank you for writing this. |
| Ethyrin Kairos chapter 6 . 7/10/2013 This is kinda sad. Definitely drama and angst. |
| Hannah chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 I recently looked up the meaning of Teme on the internet, it is a rude form of 'you' |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/5/2013 Fuck you Bigotted asshole |