Reviews for Jealousy
YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 4 . 8/14/2011
I like this though it is extremely rushed. I reccommend that you revise this because it is very hard to understand at times. It also seems a bit rushed but its so sweet. Will you update it?
Eos-hime chapter 4 . 12/15/2009
Nice, I would love to read more of this...
mochiusagi chapter 4 . 3/2/2009
Aw that was really sweet! Please update soon!
Madame Penguin chapter 4 . 7/9/2008
it would be wonderful if you were to continue but it looks like you havent updated in a while T_T
NightWinfield chapter 4 . 6/23/2008
i like your story. keep going. and i like haruka-kantarou pair i support your story
darkchild chapter 4 . 1/16/2008
Please update as soon as possible_...
salleek chapter 4 . 1/3/2008
Your plot line is ingenious, I was very excited to read it but to be frank about the 4th chapter in it became clear to me that you need to go back and reread it because there are frequent grammar errors that mess up the flow of the piece inhibiting that readers understanding of the plot. Also you have added too many extraneous characters, it's hard to keep track of what is happening and why because there are soo many characters running aorund. So if you were to write out one character it might make your plot line more concise and understandable.
NinetailsKyuu9 chapter 4 . 11/8/2007
I LUV this fic, PLEASE continue. _
sakura-dragonwolf chapter 4 . 11/1/2007
please continue with this fic it's really good and I'd like to read more!
pretense chapter 4 . 6/5/2007
faves! Can’t wait for more! –squeals- XD
crimsonrosepetals chapter 4 . 5/5/2007
my, my ,my...newlywed couple, is it? how i wish...anyway, very nice fic so far; the plot is reather new to me and actually very amusing. please continue, i'll be waiting for the next chapter!
imuzuok chapter 4 . 5/5/2007
*jumps up and down* KAWAII! KAWAII! please update! i enjoy this very much!
minceo chapter 4 . 8/20/2006
good chap please update soon i really like this
minceo chapter 3 . 8/20/2006
good chap this just keeps getting better
minceo chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
lol i like the idea of kantarou having a brother its really good and i like how he teases Kan-chan about Hakura
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