Reviews for Fair Play
Lazuli chapter 1 . 5/25/2005

Wow... heart hurts on that one. Such a nice perspective there, and how you portrayed the Yondaime and Kakashi and just..._ Very nice characterization, flow and good grasp on a short story.
driftingwanderer chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
nice. keep writing.
Arpazia chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Amazing. I loved this. :)
Grummur chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
You're fics are completely filling, and awe-inspiring.


Mithua chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Amazingly written. Very poignant to read too. Keep up the great work!
sna chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Hey there, this was a wonderful one-shot. I thouroughly enjoyed it. A good focus, a subtle-not-sappy characterisation of the two of them and one line that made me smile sadly

"Kakashi wondered if his sensei would still smile like that if he died. He wasn't sure why it hurt so much to think that the older man probably would"

Awh. Damn that was just true and heartbreaking so well done. Good luck with all your other endeavours! This one goes in my faves.

SkItZoFrEaK chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
I like how you manage to keep the "fairness" theme subtle yet obvious. And you even manage to make Yondaime and Kakashi's relationship realistic. Yay!
martinique chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
I tend to stay away from little drabble looking fanfics on this site, mainly because I'm convinced the wordcount can say a few important things...

But I'm glad this slipped through the net, this was a beautiful little thing. Very human, and that's what I like best.
silenced lambs chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Even though its short, its such a nice and subtle insight into Yondaime and Kakashi's relationship...I loved it.
moi chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
very interesting story, i do enjoy reading between the lines. the writing did nicely portraying the relationship between hokage and kakashi. would be quite interesting to write about the interaction between kakashi and important people in his life. like what shaped his personalities.
goingcommando chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
beautiful. it's quite difficult to find a fic featuring yondaime that takes very liberal interpretation to the original manga/anime.

heartbreaking and true to the spirit of naruto.
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