|Reviews for 8 days|
| Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
| NoahIrene chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
REALLY GOOD for 20 Minutes!
| Fernsfairie chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Very rushed, but it makes sense. It takes me around 30-45 minutes to get a good one-shot out of my system, if it has a simple plot. 1 1/2 tops.
| spacedout86 chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
| Lady Samantha Riddle chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
| doesn't matter chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
it's pretty good for 20 minutes.
| Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Not bad, the whole 'I love you' scene was sweet. And Severus certainly got to the point of things in the beginning, didn't he?
| Sarshi chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
I liked this :-D
| Mourn-today chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
ITS CUTE ! !
| Natsuyori chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
ah that was so sweet..it doesnt unfinished..i mite enter this challenge too..even if i cant go on WIKTT
| Silent Cobra chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
interesting...random. I... like it.
| SlyGriff chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
I love it! I hope there is more to it. Its a great stroy and I think you should continue on it.
| Only-eyes-for-Riddick chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
interesting story. Interesting challenge as well, and it still makes sense, although I would love to have read it with more detail, but it was still good. I love reading your stories. Great job. Can't wait to see what else you come up with in the future.
| Cherdy the Molologist chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Cute idea, but rushed. Not your best, but then again, you only had 20 minutes. There is a live journal community called 30 minute fics, thought you might be interested.
| stickleyhunter chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
I thought it was very sweet and very good for a 20 minute fic. If you decide to finish it, I would do it as a second entry, as I like this one the way it is.