|Reviews for When It Comes|
| Dr1zzy chapter 212 . 9/14
Good story till the ending that was crap
| atlantisecret chapter 139 . 8/18
i'm gonna KILL MYSELF OH C'MON BE TOGETHER ALREADY UGHHHHHHHHHHH IT HAS BEEN 139 CHAPTER
| kellneriner chapter 2 . 5/23/2018
I wish I can review ev chapter like some kind souls here did. But I was too obsessed to getting to the next chapter I didn’t want any distraction. Finished this in 3 days, with a fulltime job, Masters program, and fasting (4/5 hrs of sleep). It’s just too incredible I couldn’t stop!
| kellneriner chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
I can’t remember how many times I’ve read and reread this masterpiece. I hope you still read your reviews cos man oh man, this is so heartwrenching and emotional and a sobfest and just amazing.
| Guest chapter 212 . 5/15/2017
FIRST I WANT TO SAY YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER...
THIS STORY MADE ME CRY,LAUGH, WAS JUST AN EMOTIONAL LONG I DON'T LIKE TO READ LONG FANFIC BUT THIS WAS TOO INTERESTING TO PUT DOWN...
I LIKED CHAPTERS 1-97 THOSE WHERE BEST.
I HAD A FEELING THAT THIS STORY MIGHT END UP IN DREAM I WAS SAD ABOUT THAT PART BUT WHEN I READ THE END I UNDERSTOOD IT ... HOWEVER I WOULD HAVE LIKE TO SEEN MORE OF HALEY AND NATHAN WHEN SHE WAKES IN THAT HOTEL ...
MEGAN I THOUGHT I WONT LIKE HER CHARACTER BUT I ENDED UP FEELING SORRY FOR HER COS OF EVERYTHING SHE WENT THROUGH.
I WOULD HAVE LIKE TO SEE HER AND NATHAN MEET UP ONCE MORE AFTER THE DIVORCE...
PLEASE WRITE MORE NALEY STORIES LIKE THESE WE KNOW THEY MENT TO BE BUT ITS WAS NICE SEE THE STRUGGLES THEY GO THROUGH TO BE TOGETHER.
| missmelsie chapter 212 . 7/14/2016
I don't know if this review will mean much to you in 2016, but I've spent 2 days reading this (and ignoring my real life) and needed to write this review. Firstly, thank you for actually completing this fic! There's nothing more heartbreaking than getting into a well-written story, only for it to leave you hanging because the author has abandoned it like, 10 years ago.
This fic is quite the ride, and now that I've finished I'm amazed at how you kept it all afloat for such a long time. I've never read anything like this in the fanfic world and I don't know how you did it! So thank you for some great escapism. You're incredibly talented and I've loved the ride!
| Guest chapter 212 . 6/5/2016
I finally finished and here are my thoughts. The story is seriously awesome. The ride from chapter 1- 197 was amazing. Since the ending basically says that the "dream" is their destiny anyway and is going to happen, I just personally prefer to believe that it did happen and the story for me, ends at 197. I totally get what you were trying to do with your storyline but for me, the dream aspect took away from the overall story more than it added. I just think it would've been better for them if their destiny just happened that way without her knowing and choosing it. All the times she told him that if she could turn back time she would, are not true now. I just think it would be better all around if she chose to stay on tour and it all happened like the dream, but she didn't know and choose it beforehand.
So, basically bravo. Awesome and incredible story. I loved every minute from 1-197. I'm just choosing in my little fanfic reading brain that it happens without her knowing and ends at chapter 197.
| Guest chapter 85 . 6/4/2016
Brooke is a total witch in this story which is hard to visualize and stomach considering the rest of the show that came much later after this story, Brooke and Haley became close friends. But this is one of the only stories I've read where I like Peyton, so there's that..
| Guest chapter 65 . 6/3/2016
I just have to say that I've read a few of your stories now and although I don't always like them or agree with it or enjoy all your character versions, you are still an incredible writer. I have to give it you, you have the nerve to go places with your storylines that not many writers will. I dig that. You give zero shits and just do you with your writing and creativity. I respect that and it makes it makes it hella fun to read.
| Guest chapter 56 . 6/3/2016
No! No! No! I knew she was going to do something to make a fool of herself. I don't want her to!
| Guest chapter 211 . 4/28/2016
You're ending sucked!
| Clililou chapter 65 . 6/23/2014
OH MY GOSH ! Your story is incredible ... I really love it even though I haven't finished it yet !
But I mean Nathan loves Haley ... It's soooo obvious how could he be so mean !
Megan is cool and everything but she is just a pale copy of Haley ... It's so sad but I have to continue this because something tells me that it will not end with so much pain ...
Anyway, great story ... great everything I mean I love the way you write, it's very gripping ! ;)
| brianna4797 chapter 212 . 4/26/2014
Woah ! 212 chapters.
This is definitely the LONGEST story i ever read on hear lol.
it was totally worth it tho :)
I Cant even begin to explain how much i love this story.
I was a little confused when she woke up still on the tour BUT once i finished this, i fell in love with the idea.
the way you wrote it fit perfectly.
now im on to read the rest of your stories!
| brianna4797 chapter 77 . 4/23/2014
I seriously have not been able to put the story down lol. I'm hooked ;)
Im so shocked saying this but I actually like Chris in the story so far lol ! Can't wait to see what happens next :)
| rheaxoxx chapter 189 . 10/12/2013
omg this is so beautifully written. great