Reviews for The Orphan: Book One
SuperApplePie chapter 19 . 2/7
A lot more interesting than the other Harry in Slytherin stories.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/2/2017
Younasshole, this story is almost as old as me. Fucking update
aster chapter 12 . 10/26/2017
the plot is superb. shame though, there are only 19 chapters.
Anoneme chapter 6 . 3/17/2017
As a person with a major sweet tooth, the bit with the candy, Dumbledor, Blaise and Fawkes tickled my funny bone. XD
Anoneme chapter 6 . 3/17/2017
As a person with a major sweet tooth, the bit with the candy, Dumbledor, Blaise and Fawkes tickled my funny bone. XD
Cinthya chapter 19 . 9/8/2016
After reading this far i understand something. You really love making harry spill the beans like with red and gold...*smirk*
Blaise chapter 3 . 6/12/2016
Blaise is a boy?
Prince of darkness 44 chapter 6 . 6/6/2016
I was under the expression that blaise zabini was a male not a female plus did his mother die or something because I was under the expression that his mother was known as the black widow
FotoDi chapter 6 . 10/17/2015
Clothes, money, books, food, informed consent from custodial guardian...?
SortingHat chapter 16 . 9/19/2015
I much liked the idea of them making a break for it to the Slytherin Dungeons. Are there any spells that could've used a smoke screen? Like I've said in another chapter I think if they had chosen to learn *muggle* chemistry they could've made a potion of their own to cause a distraction to get away that would be just as good as a magic potion.
SortingHat chapter 15 . 9/19/2015
They either belong in Ravenclaw or Huff n Puff.
SortingHat chapter 13 . 9/19/2015
I am surprised that none of them ask if it's similar to learning to fly a *single engine* plane and if taking the lessons will help your skills improve as a private pilot or a pilot for hire in the muggle world?
SortingHat chapter 13 . 9/18/2015
Using different kinds of acids/chemicals to cause explosions/smoke screens or otherwise escape distractions to help them out in danger would be very helpful since no magic was used therefore nothing is traced. And eventually once Harry tells Fred and George how they did it there might even be a new interest in the mixtures of chemicals that causes different reactions showing the muggles aren't as stupid as they think.
SortingHat chapter 12 . 9/18/2015
I wonder if anybody there remembers the event when the Quidditch Field was covered entirely in chocolate pudding by a nasty prank and as each player was knocked from their broom they all got sticky and stuck tight eating their way out of the field!

Of course there were no winners because the Snitch was covered as well and nobody could find it for days!
SortingHat chapter 12 . 9/18/2015
That dream Harry had is obviously a hint about that Professor's turbine he wears having to do with Slytherin and Voldermort. Should have been a dead give away right there.
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