Reviews for The Orphan: Book One
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11
You should change it to now onto Phase Two, not Plan B, since Plan B implies that it's a different plan, but the rest of the information suggests that they're moving on to the next part of their first plan, which would be Plan A.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/20
Pleeeeease write more of this! Its such a good fic, and I love the light-hearted nature of it.
Nate chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
And we're supposed to like Hagrid and McGonagall in this scene exactly why?
I normally dislike Vernon and Petunia, but here - Hagrid and McGonagall come across as fucking bullying assholes that deserve a fucking ass beating.
KingLoitl chapter 19 . 5/12/2014
update please! funny as hell :D
Cillit Bang Bang chapter 19 . 4/15/2014
Six and a half years since the last update... And it's a tragedy.


Because I love absolutely everything about this fic. It's great, glorious, fantastic, it's funny, witty, it... Okay, so I don't see why it was necessary for the owls to not find Harry at first, but whatever, everything else is wonderful.

You - in the vain hope that you're still entering your account sometimes - did an unbelievably good job with dialogue and characterisation, it's been pure joy to read from beginning to end, and as such...

I stand by my initial statement. A true tragedy this was abandoned.
ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 12 . 4/15/2014
Nice chappie
ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 10 . 4/15/2014
Lmao, everyone's reactions were priceless, I could just imagine Snape, haha! Harry, imo, should have been sorted into Slytherin, would have been so cool and better, pftt. But maybe, I' m being biased. I'm a snake too ;)
ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 8 . 4/15/2014
Had me laughing in all m parts. Now this one is truly unique. I have read so many slytherin harry stories, but yours is truly different and creative. Really like it so far. And I just love how devious Blaise and Harry are. And I just can't wait to see everyone everyone's expressions when harry geta sorted, haha!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
TMR's orphanage of course!
SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Oh no
Pure-chan chapter 19 . 11/16/2013
I loves how Blaise is in this story. I couldn't stop laughing when I read the part where she shook Nott's shoulder and shouted at him. Good job
Guest chapter 19 . 10/5/2013
Continue! let the hiatus end already! this is great!
Fred071202 chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
Sorry about last time, this is an awesome fanfic so far!
Fred071202 chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
Nice fanfic, so far. I hope Sneak is okay. Also, isn't Blaise a boy in canon?
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