Reviews for Aleera
DarkMagicWhiteLight chapter 5 . 10/14/2008
OHH! I'm really interested now!
Catlover15489 chapter 5 . 9/10/2005
I love it. Please update it more. It is awesome. I would love to hear your version of Aleera's past.
angelofire chapter 5 . 5/4/2005
this is really good please update soon
Fortune Zyne chapter 5 . 5/1/2005
Oh boy!
imaginaryLife chapter 2 . 3/25/2005
Thank you lotzez!

I will definately finish this fic... eventually. lol

I am so so glad you like it!

I will fix the running together thing in the chapters to come ;)

ImaginaryLife
Mika Lockheart chapter 2 . 3/25/2005
wow! Nice job so far! The only suggestion I have is that you use paragrapghs for every different speaker. For example

Aleera smiled"I remembered Verona, what I was like before Dracula made me his bride" Verona looked at her in shock, "ALeera thats impossible!"

Instead try using paragrapghs for every speaker so it looks like

Aleera smiled. "I remembered,Verona. I remember what I was like before DRacula turned me into his bride."

Verona looked at her in shock. "Thats Impossible!"

It just makes the story easier to read. I really love the idea behind your story though, realluy nice writing. keep updating sweetie!