Reviews for The One
VegeBulLover chapter 4 . 7/11/2016
Are you going to continue? This is such a good story i want to know more!
Vegeta Semaj Ouji chapter 4 . 6/19/2016
Very good plz update soon
ShadowLDrago chapter 4 . 9/17/2013
Very interesting, did not see Chi Chi kicking Goku where the sun doesn't shine coming though.
ShadowLDrago chapter 3 . 9/17/2013
Ouch Goku! Who knew he could be so cruel at times? I do enjoy this either way of course.
VegetaBulma Fan chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I am sorry to say that the author of this story will not be returning. I am
not trying to be mean or offend anybody, but this author has decide not
to continue writing this story.

The reason why he/she stopped posting updates is because in the begining
there was a lot of people gave this author negative comments. They also
kept bugging them about how they were taking to long. And so because of
all the negative feedback he/she got they finally decide not to continue writing.

That also goes for the other fanfics he/she has done. It has been eight years and I am sorry to say this but he/she will not be returning. Even though some authors have come back; this author however didn't like the bad comments others. Other loyal fans like myself and you have tried to encourage he/she to ignore all those naysayers.

But unforunately he/she made a decision on not to all I can say is thank you for supporting this author, for reading his/her fanfictions, and also your wonderful comments over the years.

A moment of silence for Trunksgurl...Thank and have a nice day. - J
Joe B chapter 4 . 1/1/2013
Okinawa Girl chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
Please update this story is really good it MUST FINISH!
VxBluvr chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
Please. Please. Please up date soon! I have to finish this! Please! Vegeta- Stop begging Woman! Me- *blows rasberry* Idk HOW Bulma can put up with you!
PerfectLover chapter 4 . 8/6/2010
This is a very good story! I really hope you get to update it soon!
yzhuank chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
it's a really good story...

please finish it...
citigirl13 chapter 4 . 4/9/2010
rosechick chapter 4 . 8/2/2009
Its good so far I hope you finish it
Hinata1020569 chapter 4 . 6/23/2008
Please write more!
patdav chapter 4 . 12/29/2007
very very very good

I want to know what going on with Goku and Chi Chi relationship..

I thought in the begining chi chi didnt believe in the war...

I never going yto be finish is it
DBZ maineak chapter 4 . 8/17/2007
YO! i cant wait for the next chap! and please givme a in s to wo blow te house?
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