|Reviews for And Then There Was One|
| jmstevens chapter 10 . 8/6/2008
Exactly, Bravo. *g*
| jmstevens chapter 9 . 8/6/2008
Favorite moment: Grissom telling Catherine in complete honesty that Catherine is a people person, and Sara being jealous.
Hope Cecilia can keep up with Catherine!
| jmstevens chapter 8 . 8/6/2008
Lol...poor Grissom..he's so befuddled, it's adorable!
Should be interesting.
| jmstevens chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I liked how you put an outsider spin on the autopsy Ie; describing the smell of the autopsy bay and how the experience wasn't something that Cecilia had ever pictured before.
"Gruesome Grissom"...I forgot that was his nickname. Lol
Sounds like Brass is starting to relax a little around her. That's always good.
| jmstevens chapter 6 . 8/6/2008
Ooh..another cliff hanger ending to the chappie.
Liked how you wrote about both Grissom's and Catherine's memories of Eddies' funeral. I think that Grissom has always been somewhat protective of her, even if he doesn't always know how to express his concern for her.
Another well-done chapter. Going back to reading more now.
| jmstevens chapter 2 . 8/6/2008
Ooh...cliff hanger chapter right from the beginning. I had to snigger at the way Conrad was going on about his written articles and then all of a sudden Grissom and his CSI's show up.
YOu did very well writing their characters.
| jmstevens chapter 3 . 8/6/2008
Ooh..Brass knew the victim * winces in empathy to poor Brass*. Somehow shoulda expected Brass would have Denny's wife on the suspect list from the get-go
| jmstevens chapter 4 . 8/6/2008
Lol 'Yeah and I'm Brad Pitt'. You really got Brass nailed from his dry sarcasm to his wariness of media.
Favorite chapter so far.
| jmstevens chapter 5 . 8/6/2008
Huh? I'm confused. I think I have to read on...what did Grissom do now?
| bleachizluvx3 chapter 57 . 7/7/2008
AHH!IT! UPDATE SOON!
| Drakkenfyre chapter 57 . 6/9/2008
Hey Canadian, want to make a deal? I don't know if you're still around. I mean, you could be dead or something could have happened so that you can't write anymore.
But if you are alive, and are able to write, how about this: You finish your story and I'll finish mine.
| Drakkenfyre chapter 41 . 6/7/2008
He he, your Canadian is showing. Three of those stores exist in Canada, but not in the US.
Besides, after Laura Secord gave that intel to Lieutenant (pronounced lef-ten-ant by you and I) FitzGibbon, would Americans buy chocolates from a chocolate shop after her? I think they might still be a little angry about that war, over things like the Burning of Washington-however, I will point out that a little White House and a shipyard hardly pays back them burning York and our parliament buildings. ;)
I won't tell you the other two, but you'll be able to figure them out.
And since I'm being nit-picky, it's CVS Pharmacies, not CVC, and it's "stomach," not "stomache." But I make mistakes like these all the time, so I'm not judging, just pointing out.
Okay, enough nit-picking; on to the good points. :)
First, let me reiterate strongly that this is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read. Darn, it's a fabulous piece of fiction, period.
The flashback was absolutely perfect. It was in the right place and it perfectly brought our emotions right back into the story. And it was so fricking sad!
Also, I was happy to see yet another POV. I think you nailed the Brass-Warrick emotional entanglement over Holly Gribbs.
You also write flirtation very well. Whew! Did someone turn up the heat in here? And the fabric bit about the thong? I laughed out loud, probably to the chagrin of those sleeping here.
And why are there people sleeping here? Because your story-your novel-is just so good that I just want to read one . . . more . . . chapter before I go to bed. :D
| Drakkenfyre chapter 38 . 6/5/2008
This chapter is just full of really excellent writing. It was like reading a mystery novel, only it was better than a lot that I've read.
| Drakkenfyre chapter 29 . 6/1/2008
Wow, what a beautiful chapter. Especially the last narrative bit, the last four paragraphs.
| Drakkenfyre chapter 23 . 5/29/2008
ROFL, I loved the meta fan fiction bit! :D