Reviews for A Walk in the Park
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Lerrinus chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Great story, you got the emotions and reactions down pat and I especially like Daniel's thoughts at the end. Keep up the good work! :-)
jedijunkie chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Wow. That was good! I think it would be awesome if you added more to it, maybe even throw in a twist or two that didn't happen in the episode. (I for one LOVE Danny whumping!) Great job and keep up the good work!
good chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
sehr gut
DarkJediQueen chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
This was good...I always wondered how they got him to jump w/o promting...I mean in that one...Thor's Hammer he talks about how he's scared of heights...
Nighshae chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Very, very, *VERY GOOD*! :D Well thought out, and very, very good characterization for Daniel. Are you going to do a second chapter of what happened on the way down?