Reviews for First Love
Inali Grimalkin chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Very sweet story, it's too bad that they're so far apart in age. Who knows, maybe one day when they're both adults it'll be okay.
Ross Wyatt chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Will you please try to write a sequel where Mac is older? :D...
A True Radical Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
I liked it a lot. I came into the Foster's grouping here expecting to find a load of Frankie/Mac stories but, to my utter shock, I found next to none.

I say that if authors can make all the yaoi pairings with Mac and freakin' Bloo of all things then Fankie/Mac isn't so far off. Sure, it would have to take place a little ways down the road, but it's not nearly as far-fetched as Mac/Bloo or the other strange pairings that seem to be so popular on here. Keep up the wonderful work for a wonderful pairing.
Anna-Morgause chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
It's a nice story but, Frankie is around 17-years-old in the show and Mac is like ten.
Zirta chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
OMG! So sweet! Excellent job, I can definitely see this happening in the show! I loved all their lines, I didn't know Bloo mixed spanish and english? I only watch the mexican dub, that's why xD Thank you for writing this story, Mac and Frankie forever!
Actress020306 chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
nice
Vivi007Nee chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
yay! Lurve me some Mac/Frankie WAFF! Great job, keep writing! .
profile to be deleted chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Aww, I loved that. X3 Absolutely adorable!
D3stiny-Sm4sher chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
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Ah, like Fluffy-Puff Marshmallows. Only these are, like, the Fluffy-Puff Niblins, or somethin', 'cuz it's a short story...

Nothing wrong with that, though. It's perfectly adorable. You captured the characters very well, keeping them inside their own personas (you'd be amazed at the difficulty some people have with this).

"Wanna watch me play paddle ball?"

LOL. Bloo is so self-centered. But that's why we love him so much.

The Frankie/Mac romance is quite an interesting topic, and I'm glad to see that you did it exactly the way I think it should be. It's puppy love, plain and simple, and it's adorable. Years from now, Mac won't even REMEMBER ever having a crush on Frankie. That's how those things go.

"And a lot of the guys I date are only out for one thing…”

"What's that?"

Excellent way of reminding us of just how naive Mac is.

All in all, good detail, good plot for a one-shot, and executed well. I'm quite pleased with this one, and I may have to check out some more Foster's Fiction around here...

I hope I can write Frankie well in my OWN fiction, at that. Very good job.
Yami-MeKayla chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Aw this is adorable. I like how it was written. It was very well written. I applaud you. *Clap clap* Awesome job

~*!Kay!*~
startoftheapocalypseforFMpairing chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
You know, Mac and Frankie CAN happen if something really weird involving some evil Imaginary Friend pops in from outta nowhere. I think I'll write one myself! If I can...

Great story, dude!
LittleGothGirl chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Wow! How awesome!

Can you contact me? Pwety pwease?
o chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
PS. wonderfully written )
o chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
that was sweet. yeay fluffiness!
Magic Kaito chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
That was so cute! Yeah, I liked how Mac got a crush on her, too, for some odd reason. I was kind of rooting for him even though the age difference is huge, lol. Very good fic!
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