|Reviews for Where is my Brother?|
| supersaiyaman chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
i wonder how this story differs from the movie of course at this point the movie hasnt even come out yet were you are ore wene this was written.
i wonder what all will do to try and get his brother back.
| Shari Maxwell chapter 2 . 7/26/2005
Loving it! (But I noticed some words missing here and there.)
| Reniefuwa chapter 2 . 7/21/2005
One word jumps to mind: proofread. You seem to know where you want to go with the story, and it sounds good, but I saw a lot of repeated phrases and rambling sentences. Suggetstion: read what you have written, or have someone else read it who is good at proofreading. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
| Reijou chapter 19 . 7/10/2005
Hello! Hey! It's me! Chibi Reina! Or...um... the person who wrote Lord of the Alchemists!
I like the story so far, please continue!
| YouKnowPoo chapter 17 . 7/8/2005
MORE MORE MORE I NEED MORE ! anywayws NICE!
| YouKnowPoo chapter 15 . 7/8/2005
that was soo quick...
| YouKnowPoo chapter 13 . 7/8/2005
ITS hawkeye I know its gunna be hawkeye to fight Roy
| YouKnowPoo chapter 12 . 7/8/2005
MUSTANG NOT HIM I will protect you from umm ENVY! No he's gunna be hawkeye I BET! NO i dont wanna fight Hawkeye :(
| YouKnowPoo chapter 10 . 7/8/2005
NO THE BASTARD MOFO SCAR Ill KICK your ASS MY SELf Water Alchemist power in yah FACE YOU MOFo HOBO LIL OMG YOU HURT AL ILL KILL YOU!
| YouKnowPoo chapter 9 . 7/8/2005
WINRY that BI- NVM BASTARD! Roy SAID SORRY WHAT A MUTHA- UGH she makes me sick!
| YouKnowPoo chapter 8 . 7/8/2005
creation TWIN? Envy WHY IS ENVY STILL BAD? BS! TWO ENvy's I CAN hardly stand one :(
| YouKnowPoo chapter 7 . 7/8/2005
WOW! Doesn't go and fight? THAT MAKES ME SAD NO GUNDSHOOTING FROM HAWKEYE I JUST WANNA EXIT NOW! Ill read some more and find out ! XD
| YouKnowPoo chapter 6 . 7/8/2005
who are the two cloaked figures? I need to know I aquabubble the water alchemist shall deal with them by the way aquabubble is my second name :) MUAHAH GOOD-ASS CHPTER KEEP ON ROCKIN!
| YouKnowPoo chapter 5 . 7/8/2005
GREED? THAT...THAT guys! ALIVE! Well another great chpter! imma review some more I hope greeds a good guy
| YouKnowPoo chapter 3 . 7/8/2005
Sorry i didnt review chpt 1&2 you'll see my reasons OMG I LOVE THIS FF your making wanna WATCH THE MOVIE! I wonder if we can dl it!