Reviews for Comatose
FallenHope-Angel chapter 4 . 4/28/2011
that was so cute and so very sweet. i loved it so much adn well it was just so cute! poor tala though i mean he has survivors uilt even if it is indirectly.
Darial chapter 4 . 9/29/2008
*bawling anime-style* Do I need to say more?
Lover of all that is Animated chapter 4 . 6/20/2008
I like it!

I'm gonna start reading 'Comrades' right now!

whyamidoingthis01 chapter 4 . 7/22/2006
Wonderful! On eof the best short stories I have ever read!
SpiritualEnergy chapter 4 . 6/2/2006
This was truly awesome. Really. I loved how you brought out so many emotions - both Tala's and Kai's, and even the others'. Your idea about why Tala cried is a very logical one, and it probably was most likely the reason. I'm also happy that - although I like a good Yaoi story every now and then - you didn't make this a Yaoi story. It would've taken away the idea of Tala and Kai's friendship, and I loved how In-Character they were. Very beautiful story. I felt so connected to them. I really enjoyed reading this - great work.
Darkened-Storm chapter 4 . 1/7/2006

This is one awesome fic!

You must really like Tala...heehee...not that i can blame you, he's my fave character...tied with kai!


storm-of-insanity chapter 4 . 9/5/2005


this is so damned brilliant i'm completely stunned.


i mean waoh.

that was so good. so touching.


man i love this

i can't say it enough times
Fifi McFu chapter 4 . 8/29/2005
wowwee! that was fab! i was actually crying when kai was dying in the tunnel. you wrote it really well for someone who has never seen g-rev. btw, u can download g-rev from

so anyways, thanks for writin such a fabbie story!

love fifi mcfu
CucumberPickles chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
I just wanted to say that I didn't get to finish watching G-Rev either and that I only watched up to just before Tala sneaks into BEGA. Even still, I think it's good so far.
YuriyTalaIvanov chapter 4 . 8/14/2005
YaY!Kai's not dead! :)
Tala's-soul chapter 2 . 8/6/2005
Kai's back! YaY! I really like this!Your so good
Ellen chapter 4 . 8/4/2005
Chibi Tala and Kai...cuteness.

It was a very prettiful piece of writing. I like. )

Ellen chapter 3 . 8/4/2005
NU! Kai! [cries]

OMGness...Tala...not you too!

Ellen chapter 2 . 8/4/2005
Yes, yes he will pay. Stupid bastard!

I love how they all seemed to care about him...I mean, I would be teh PISSED if I were in that tournament.

Ellen chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Oh boy...!NU, TALA!

I'm okay now.

Well, it's a good start.

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