|Reviews for Lost In The Crowd|
| Cholena chapter 25 . 3/3/2011
I know you have been writing for a long time and what not. But some of your sentences are run-ons. Nice plot, but the tenses kept changing. And the use of Valentines Day as a wedding day is a little over used in your stories. Spice it up.
| Pinayprincesa chapter 25 . 7/29/2006
aw so cute!
| stacia chapter 25 . 3/7/2006
great great story!
| pianogal chapter 25 . 6/30/2005
omg. i just read that and it was...i don't know what to say. you probably think i'm like completely nuts for reading a bunch of your older stories but i just love your writing and your stories. they are just...awesome, the best, amazing...i don't know. the whole time through this one i was trying to figure out how the title worked in and you put it in there at the end. that was really cool. good job as usual.
| kitten1801 chapter 25 . 5/22/2005
I read the story for the first time minutes ago and i must tell ya... I LOVE IT! Oh my god, that's so cute. U did a really good job. And it would be cool to read a sequel of it.
| freekshow chapter 25 . 5/1/2005
that was the sweetest ending ever, i got tears in my eyes reading it (ya i kno im such a sap lol)
i loved your fanfic, ur a great writer
ill b looking out 4 another one of your stories
| FloridaorBust151 chapter 25 . 4/30/2005
I loved this story soo much! That last chapter was perfect, brought a tear to my eye! You should do a sequel, although this story is perfect just as a one story thing!
| Audacious chapter 25 . 4/30/2005
Hey nice ending to the story! :) Hope you start up another one soon! -audacious
| randysprincess chapter 25 . 4/29/2005
I would love a sequel. I love this story and sad to see it go.
| jamie L chapter 25 . 4/28/2005
I am such a lush for love stories...and you had me in tears. I LOVED IT!
| prozac.will.be.my.nation chapter 25 . 4/28/2005
GREAT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! I am seriously crying now!
| prozac.will.be.my.nation chapter 23 . 4/28/2005
YEA! perfect couple... i am crying... again, i am so happy!
| prozac.will.be.my.nation chapter 20 . 4/26/2005
AW! So sweet! I hope that they end up having at least 2 kids at the end of this FanFic
| FloridaorBust151 chapter 20 . 4/25/2005
I love this story! I just read the whole thing, its awesome! Dave is such a sweetie! Aw, meltin my heart!
| Rachel chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
i absolutely love this story. i always come onn looking if you updated. i think that you should keep writing because this is really a great story. i also like it because my name is rachel and i have never seen a story with the main character's name being rachel. all in all i think this story is awesome and i think you should keep writing it.
one thing that i might do is make the love-type secene a little steamier because i know that i probably speak for everyone when i say that a naked batista is a good batista! lol