Reviews for Jaded Perfection
YumeHikari chapter 12 . 1/25/2013
I really like your writing style, especially on the first six or so (even with the occasional mispelling), it really lends itself to the vignettes that you are writing. I'm going to miss not having more of these to read on .
silver replies chapter 4 . 10/22/2007
I think you spelled her name wrong. I think it's spelled "Hatshepsut."
LynLin chapter 12 . 6/13/2007
Wow I really like these drabbles. Maybe I'll go look at your livejournal. Anyway, all I have to say is: wow. You really have a way with words.

-Lyn
dragonlady222 chapter 12 . 1/23/2007
Good job. I do feel sorry for Ryou so much sorrow in his life.
dragonlady222 chapter 11 . 1/23/2007
Good chapter. RYou is finding out a lot about himself.
dragonlady222 chapter 10 . 1/23/2007
Great!
dragonlady222 chapter 9 . 1/23/2007
Poor Ryou, Bakura is protecting him as best he can. Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 8 . 1/23/2007
Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 1/23/2007
Poor Ryou. Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 6 . 1/23/2007
This is so sweet and angsty.
dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 1/23/2007
Great! I love this so far.
dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 1/23/2007
Great!
dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 1/23/2007
Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 2 . 1/23/2007
Good chapter. They are enjoying each other.
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
Good chapter.
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