Reviews for Loss
Caladhiel Elensul chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Yup, it's me. I finally got around to reading it. IT DOES NOT SUCK :( And I'm turning into a harsh Boromir critic. I actually like it quite a lot, you summed up the aftermath perfectly. It all fit nicely into the LotR universe.

One criticism, though. "...Wasn’t too gloomy but wasn’t overly cheerful. Just some kind advice," is Bethie-speak: vocabulary you would use, but Boromir would not. If I can give any advice at all it's to work on capturing the "voice" of a character... hard to do when its not one of your own. But I still like it very much, and one criticism does not mean it sucks, l? ;)
Gwen Gamgee chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
Beautiful. You always manage to capture Frodo's pain so well.
spiritstallion chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
I really loved Boromir's pov in this story. Could you do more Boromir pov stories? Please?
kareajo chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Kinda Unclear but otherwise my favorite verse was- "Don't carry the weight of the dead."

T2U Tonite,