Reviews for Before the Dawn
StormHornet chapter 11 . 7/5/2005
Good I'm glad she didn't completely forgive Kenshin... i liked the whole...

One day I confronted him. “Do you think you can capture my heart with flowers and kindness?” I yelled at him.

He nodded, somewhat sheepish. He was smiling away, just like Soujiro used to. He looked so innocent, so sweet…

It was taking all of my control to not jump into his arms. I knew I should not be feeling this. Most of me didn’t want to be feeling this. It was not my fault that I had fallen again for Himura Kenshin. “You are… you are –” and I lost it. “You are right!” I blubbered, “You can and you did!” and, with that, I ran forward into his open arms. Sometimes I am so stupid I cannot believe it.

It only works if you say 'so stupid' like 'so stewpid' in the european way... the way u say it, Kiwibear.

And then 'For reasons even stupidity cannot guess' I loved. It only works if you say stupidity right tho... just like with 'so stupid' above... it only works if you say 'stupidity' the way u do... 'stewpidity'...

I mean, it does work if u say 'stoopid' but it sound cooler with 'stewpid'.

Wow this is a long review... LOL

StormHornet chapter 10 . 7/5/2005
Kaoru's daddy had it coming! yay I'm glad she finally did something about the bossy man...

StormHornet chapter 9 . 7/5/2005
Ok, excuse the curse without the asterics (i can't spell is that how u spell it?) but KENSHIN YOU BASTARD!

horrible little mangy little girly-man with long girly red hair and his little girly pink gi...

kami I wish he would just lose to someone you know? Like Saito or Sou-sama... something!

StormHornet chapter 8 . 7/5/2005
OMG I could just hear the gangster-y like voices of the men (probably cuz emma does such good immitations... its scary!)

yay Okita-sama! I love you!

But... but... ::lower lip trembles::



StormHornet chapter 7 . 7/5/2005

(I forgot to say in my last review that I reeally like the 'no I'm going to see Sou-kun' thing. And I like how it became all silent after Kaoru said that...

I really love this chappie... lots of Sou-chan!

StormHornet chapter 6 . 7/5/2005
That is so sweet... sister cuteness!

'“You kissed him?” Tomoe exclaimed.

“Because I invited him to go to the Temple of Kurai with Misao, Aoshi and I. A troubling thing happened and he walked me home. Besides,” I muttered, “it was only on the cheek that I kissed him.”

“Damn.” Tomoe mumbled.'

That is really adorable! I love Tomoe in this fic!

StormHornet chapter 5 . 7/5/2005
Yay! Fluff between Aoshi and Kaoru... to bad its forbidden fluff.

(Forbidden Fluff... I like it!)

Ken/Kao fluff too... thats cute as well. Not as cute tho.


P.S. I'm reading The Last of The Sky Pirates; its realy good I see why u luv it!
StormHornet chapter 4 . 7/5/2005
Oh Kenshin is a b*! Horrible little... what's he done I can't remember... (LOL)

But I know he's being mean and bad and... ::babbles endlessly::

StormHornet chapter 3 . 7/5/2005

I LOVED the whole humiliation thing... '"Kaoru get away I love Chizuru!" AH!' Soo funny.

And 'Why are you in your nightgown?' Hahahaha...


Sakura-chan! Poor Sakura-chan...

StormHornet chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
'Sir Brags-a-lot' ::cackles::

Good chappie as always!

StormHornet chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Honestly, I prefer Black Red (cuz it's darker and sadder) but I love this too!

and Aoshi-sama is in this! (Sou-sama is too, if I remember correctly... right?)

ooh Yahiko likes Kaoru finally the little brat has been nice he annoys me so much.

dr silly chapter 11 . 5/12/2005
That was a kinda stupid chapter.
Royal blueKitsune chapter 11 . 5/12/2005
Wow pls try and start the sequel soon!I can't wait to see what happends!
maxy-chan chapter 11 . 5/12/2005
Huh? Weird chappie... Is this the end? I don't really get it... Who is Daemon? OMG I can't believe you're letting me sit here with an open end! ;_; I really don't get it... anyways, the remainder was great as always! Only the end was a bit indistinct... I'm waiting for that sequel!

Well X -keep up the good work!
seexxy gal chapter 11 . 5/12/2005
A sequel, please make it better than this. This story sucked. The plot was rushed, please make your next story better.
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