|Reviews for Initium|
| Eerie Iri chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
This story wasn't my cup of tea, but the way you wrote it was REALLY good.
| Eerie Iri chapter 3 . 10/28/2010
Very well written.
| Eerie Iri chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
| Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
| Ginnia chapter 4 . 7/10/2008
This is such an interesting story I hope you will chose to update it. Maybe Jack can learn some magic while she is there.
| Lunatic Pandora1 chapter 4 . 12/12/2006
Well this is rather interesting, what would be more interesting thought is if Riddick got there, or if Jack learnt to properly use a weapon, or magic.
| Gwen6 chapter 3 . 6/1/2005
Brilliant. Perfect combination (as your previous story) of humour, seriousness, curiosity and quick-paceness. I hope you are going to be continuing with the tale.
| bladdyblahblah chapter 3 . 3/29/2005
Cool a chappy that i didn't preread. awesome.
*is veryveryvery sleepy*
I'ma gonna go ta beddyby now.
| bladdyblahblah chapter 2 . 3/29/2005
"Oh, no… you laugh, you bloody bastard, and I’ll be giving you a close-range view of a fireball!"
I think that is my fav. line in this chappy.
Do I have to rereview the 1st chappy?
if i have to i will but not 2night.