Reviews for Mitsuru's Dream
Checkers chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
XDD LOL!

Go MXM! You should do one for Nozomu too! Wait...nah, it'll be abit hard, since he's already so...forward...o_o""

Nice one-shot!

(I loved it when was like "What did I say"? - I could just imagine him going "crapcrapcrapcrapcrap..." in his head xD)
NatureRocks411 chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
I can't log in wah! anyways ... i like this story
manic killer chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
make more make more or the various and un be known items that i have wont magically appear in your room.

(ah! a sock fell into my room! gasp! where could it have come from?)
HolyTrinityFox-and-RathGirl89 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
i went back and checked and i couldn't believe i hadn't reviewed this one! this one shot was so cute! i love m&m! i wonder what mitsuru said, though?
iceboltmage chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
this is a good story.
Chibi Muse-chan chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
I LOVE your fic! I wish you could update as soon as possible! 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Sylphion chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Damn funny story, really good. You wrote Mitsuru out really well, I think (I only have the first two, so I don't know that much about him).

I hope you reconsider the 'one-shot' label, this could go on. _ (I can see it now, even MORE tension in the Moonshine, as Mitsuru constantly worries just what exactly is *WAS* that he said about Mahiru.)
mitsurunozomulover chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
wow,i really can see that happen, damn funny fanfic hope you make more:)
deactivatedforever23890214 chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Why stop now? Go full on fanfic. This is too good to be just a one shot. Keep goin'!
Kaiya chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
well now that i have been mentioned in your story i must say...hihi ppl and Ri...WONDERFUL STORY! i must say damn is a pretty fine word lol so are many others and dont worry the characters are portrayed better than a few others that i have read here and other places...now we just need to get our joint story posted and all lol...and...damn i need a username here gr... yeah i have the one at fictionpress and all Kumiko Neko but i cant post any fanfics WA *starts to cry* well *sniff* anyways i must go due to anouncments lol see ya in homeroom _ and i must add this last thing...('')
Lari-itza chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
It's so damn good. It seems you like that word a lot.
psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
That was really funny! Hahahah. I could just see Mitsuru doing that. Oh... hahahah.

I noticed something when I was reading my review replies to Ward 17 sometime ago. I replied to your reivew (you're sorakeyblader, ne?) but I didn't give you a lollipop! So... ~gives you a lollipop of your fav flavor~ gomen if its a little late. ~bows~ And again, funny fic. .~