|Reviews for On the Edge|
| AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Very good. A few grammer mistakes, and Yuki was just a bit out of character at some points, but, besides that, a really nice story. I really liked it. Good job
| Petitejam chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Methinks the ending is a bit too abrupt. Because all the angsty build up. Something a little less positive but still with an over positive outlook would've been nicer. It was wrapped up too sweetly I guess is what I'm trying to say. I have however read this fic so many times! Just never realised it before. It's been archived around yes? Lovely story anyway. Rooftops. XD
| bakazaruaddict chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
Wow... very well written!
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Sh**! (thats a good thing trust me) my eyes were beginning to water with this! the dreams and deja vu parts I think are so true cause your subconcious often recognises things before you do and it shows in your dreams, same with stresses and whatnot - I'm all into that dream quality. Personally though that line "Your Yuki will always save you" just doesn't sound right, though i suppose 'I will always save you' could be seen as too cliche but you really had me believing this was gonna be a suicide fic. so yeah nice one!
| SweetG chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
You inspired me to write some silly poem with your beautiful plot and writtin' skills.
| LadyMoonDemon chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
I know it's a little late to review this, but I'm reviewing it anyways. This story was thouching and it almost brought me into tears and you keep Yuki in character _ keep up the excellent work
| FallinOutFallinIn chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
XD That was nice.
Yup, yup. Glad I read it. :)
| Azuyami chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
*wonderz if story is good...* been too busy to read it... gomen...
| cleo chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
That was excellent! Dramatic without being sappy, Romantic while staying credible to the characters and the series. This is one of the most well-written gravi fics I’ve come across in and combined. You’re very talented.
| Akeatia Foxx chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Aw! so touching!
| copgurl13 chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
Wow, this story was really heartwrenching. I loved it, and it really touched my heart. Well done, keep it up. o)
| Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
bravo! oh my dear god! this is one of the best i have ever read. it was so thrilling. it was romance with "an edge". its like a dark comedy. very dark indeed. its the kind of romance story you want to read at the dread of night with the clock tolling. its like that. and you want to take it with you because the ending was so good that you feel so warm all over.
| wolfie chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
wa! i hate you! you write so damn good! i wish to be like you! *sob* *steals angelique starlight's talent in writing* muahahahahahaha! it is mine now!
| ali chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
aw! sniff sniiff so good! omg for a minute i thought you were gonna kill off Shuichi! i almost didn't finish reading...thank god i did what an amazing ending good writing!
| MacroLuvr chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
That was so beautiful! I would have never thought of Shuichi to be one who committed suicide though I liked it.