Oh, good. I was worried for the kid.

Wow. This was...the shittiest clusterfuck of bad luck I could have imagined. Poor Team Seven! Kyuubi rampage AND Akatsuki!? I'm glad they got the tokens though. It would have sucked if their exam was not only interrupted, but utterly wasted AGAIN because of an invasion of power-hungry psychos.

You're such a talented writer. And I think you've improved since the beginning of Teamwork to now.

I'm glad they found him. It would have just been too sad otherwise.

I don't think your Naruto is OOC. If anything, he's very much like his canon self once your plot changes are taken into account.

I like that you're exploring the dynamics of a threesome. They're different people, so of course they relate to each other differently. I definitely can't see Naruto and Sasuke holding hands. I imagine it would be hard for three people to find a balance where everyone gets what affection they need. You're doing a great job!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I should've known better but I've read it and now I want more. Why did you not finish?

Oh gawd I need more of this like no tomorrow! It's so good!

Uuugghhh, so cuuuuteeeee *making inhuman noices* I don't like NaruSaku, but when it's threesome and they have these moments... *squeal happily* Awww, you just made my day!

Nooo! Gah, I'm so sad. I mean, technically I knew this was abandoned but that doesn't make the blow any softer. Still, this is an wonderful piece of writing. I adore this story: the plot, the characterizations, the relationships and conflicts. Sure you don't want to continue it?

Well, even if you chose to have the story "end" here, I really want to read on. Plz?

I only wish I could favourite this story again. XD
I love the whole baby thing. I love their relationship, and the humour that balances it and... it's gorgeous. It starts brilliantly and continues from there. It's just brilliant.

BAAAAAABY BULGE! :D

Heh. Ino is awesome.

Wonderfully done chapter...Im a little teary. His despair runs deep and he is at war with his ghosts and his thoughts. He loves and hates all at the same time and he does it with such fierceness yet refuses to let anyone see that. Heartbreaking...I loved how it all circled back around at the end there, that was the cincher that got me.

Hahahahaha that last line killed me! Im sure it killed Naruto too. Poor guy but at least hes honing some useful skills.