Reviews for Teamwork 2
ThatPageantGirl chapter 23 . 6/23
Awwwww! Naruto was so happy that Sakura is showing!
ThatPageantGirl chapter 22 . 6/22
Sasuke's come such a long way, and I knew Ino was in cahoots with Kakashi!
ThatPageantGirl chapter 21 . 6/18
This chapter is just...amazing.
ThatPageantGirl chapter 20 . 6/18
XD Those omakes gave me life! And I love that Sasuke made sure to get those last two tokens!
ThatPageantGirl chapter 19 . 6/14
ThatPageantGirl chapter 16 . 6/11 glad that they kept the tokens...
ThatPageantGirl chapter 11 . 6/5
Aww, poor Naruto! XD
ThatPageantGirl chapter 3 . 5/14
Your Kakashi always makes my day XD!
Wings Of Mercury chapter 22 . 8/10/2016
Oh, good. I was worried for the kid.
Wings Of Mercury chapter 20 . 8/10/2016
Wow. This was...the shittiest clusterfuck of bad luck I could have imagined. Poor Team Seven! Kyuubi rampage AND Akatsuki!? I'm glad they got the tokens though. It would have sucked if their exam was not only interrupted, but utterly wasted AGAIN because of an invasion of power-hungry psychos.

You're such a talented writer. And I think you've improved since the beginning of Teamwork to now.
Wings Of Mercury chapter 5 . 8/10/2016
I'm glad they found him. It would have just been too sad otherwise.
Wings Of Mercury chapter 4 . 8/10/2016
I don't think your Naruto is OOC. If anything, he's very much like his canon self once your plot changes are taken into account.

I like that you're exploring the dynamics of a threesome. They're different people, so of course they relate to each other differently. I definitely can't see Naruto and Sasuke holding hands. I imagine it would be hard for three people to find a balance where everyone gets what affection they need. You're doing a great job!
acetwolf94 chapter 24 . 4/5/2016
Mycrazybrain chapter 24 . 3/23/2016
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I should've known better but I've read it and now I want more. Why did you not finish?
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 24 . 3/17/2016
Oh gawd I need more of this like no tomorrow! It's so good!
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